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Inside the Box

What was inside the box? I pondered what it was So many tissues paper Is piled in the box I begin my task Removing slowly The tissues inside One by one piled Onto the carpet It was endless task As the tissues piled Onto the carpet Inside more tissues It seemed so endless Yet I removed more The pile growing I wondered when it ends I continue the task Removing the tissues The mist is faded I can see inside The mist is fading I stare for hours A shape I now can see I reach for the box Glancing at the box It was sealed with tape Taking the tape off I opened the box A Sheet of paper I began to read From a love one

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/21/2022 11:00:00 AM

Cute surprise... Very well penned Darlene.. Cheerz

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2022 12:08:00 PM

Hello Paghunda, so nice to see you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Valsa George

Date: 8/11/2022 9:48:00 PM

What a great surprise waiting at the end . Real love comes to us after our trifling with love for long, as this parcel reminds us. Interesting read...Darlene !

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/12/2022 4:48:00 AM

Hello Valsa, thank you Valsa it was a nice surprise for this poem to have. Thank you for a lovely comment. Blessings my friend. Hugs.

Len Gasun

Date: 8/2/2022 12:43:00 AM

It was indeed a great and lovely surprise! I was so compelled to read this fantastic poem of yours my dear friend Darlene. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem. God bless you always. Hugs. Btw, belated thank you for reading my poem Love. I found the comment quite late, sorry but from the bottom of my heart thanks a lot and this awesome poem you've shared. Have a great day!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2022 6:27:00 AM

Hello Len, I am glad you enjoyed this poem. You are welcome. Better late than not answering a comment. God Bless you . You are welcome Len. From the bottom my heart you are welcome.Have a nice day.

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/31/2022 4:42:00 AM

The best gift, an expression of love all wrapped up! What a lovely surprise Darlene, Happy Sunday xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2022 7:14:00 AM

Hello Mike, Yes a gift of love, but I do not know who from. Yet is is a wonderful gift. Happy Sunday Mike. xxxx-oooo.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 7/30/2022 11:55:00 AM

As i wrote before a Nice SURPRISE ! o loved It MY DEAR, o knew It WAS a good THING ! Dear Darlene, I just republished the poem love and sex with another title. READ SANS FEAR MY POETRY, also listen to the song that says exactly what I describe...I hope you like it xxxooo God bless you salute alkas

Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/31/2022 11:33:00 AM

POETRY soup republished, até THIS time YOU HAVE already READ It... tHANK YOU, salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2022 4:11:00 PM

Hello Alakas, I need a website to read Sans Fear. i ned a website to read your poem. you did not tell me where to read it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Is the song in English? Just wondering. God bless. xxxx-oooo. Salute Darleneyour dear friend.

Plabi Pradhan

Date: 7/29/2022 11:19:00 AM

Hello Darlene ma'am, how are you? After a long time I am here. The ending of the poem is just wow.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2022 4:12:00 AM

Hello Plabi, I am fine thank you. I am enjoying the summer. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/29/2022 10:44:00 AM

Your "Inside The Box" part two is so sweet. A great way to end it. Have a wonderful/blessed day............................

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/30/2022 4:14:00 AM

Hello Paula, Thank you Paula. It took me a while to figure out the ending. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/28/2022 6:17:00 PM

no greater gift of love than the gift of the word, from a loved one, nicely told story dear poet. Thankyou Darlene for sharing it

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2022 4:09:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose, Yes there is no greater gift than love. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. Darlene

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2022 3:30:00 PM

Oh wow, I was in suspense ! Great writing and sweet :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 4:05:00 PM

Hello Heidi thank you Heidi. Feel better soon. Hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/28/2022 1:05:00 PM

LOVELY, SIMPLY LOVELY DARLING Darlene the anticipation you built up is clever and suspenseful, glad you found a love note at the bottom of the box. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 2:40:00 PM

Hello Jennifer, Thank you Jennifer. Yes I found the note at the bottom of the box. Hugs & Blessings . I hope you are doing better today. Darlene

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/27/2022 5:40:00 PM

What a great follow up to this story. Panagiota xxx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 10:11:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, thank you. Darlene xxx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/27/2022 2:20:00 PM

Hi Darlene, loved the continuation of the box. A letter from a loved one, what more could you ask for. Now I will not ask the next question that comes for you know what that would be and it is just me being nosey. Okay, I'll ask the question, "What was in the letter?" Loved the write, Darlene. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 10:43:00 AM

Hello Mike, Thank you for the lovely comment. Someone that loved me from a long time ago. Telling me what his feelings were for me. Do i know who it is? No I do not. Have a wonderful day Mike. Hugs Always. He said - His spirit is watching ove r me. Hugs. alwyas xxx Darlene

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2022 11:23:00 AM

A lovely surprise Darlene, I hope you are keeping well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2022 12:16:00 PM

Hello Tom, Thank you. Yes I am keeping well. I am enjoying the summer. Enjoy your day my friend.