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Inside My Head---Forever Young

I close my eyes....and I'm back again.. in a hideaway, where we would play A sheltered cove on summer days A giant oak, that wore our names carved long ago by childish hands. A place that takes me far away inside my head, to yesterday Overgrown, where willows grow, and berry vines, have dangled down Thorns prick our legs, where I descend down to the river's edge again Frogs, and fish, and summer sun filters down to watch the fun, dampen brows, and warm our backs. Laughter rides the distant past Remembering, now, with eyes that mist... Longing for the summer's kiss When my legs were slim, tanned brown, and strong A rope swing lifts me in the breeze I'm drifting high above the trees I feel the mist, of rippled streams My hair is gold, beneath the sun Forever young, I plan to be Inside my head,..free as the wind
___________________________________ 9/16/15

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Date: 5/30/2016 9:29:00 PM
Those were the days my friend. Seems they get better looking back as we get older.
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:32:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:33:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Carrie!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:18:00 AM
Smiles for you, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/27/2015 12:51:00 AM
A lovely reminisce on childhood summers, that we fortunate ones can relate to, Carrie. I can feel the sun and hear a distant church bell over the hum of a tractor. Lovely write. Congratulations. Viv x
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:42:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win!!! :~) love the vision you left behind in my mind.
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:35:00 PM
such wonderful memories Carrie congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/26/2015 4:09:00 PM
So lovely, Carrie...the last two lines are breathtaking. Our memories keep us young, and your words reinforce how important that is. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/26/2015 3:05:00 PM
Damn, Carrie, I close my eyes and I fall asleep. Actually I try not to let the bottom half in on what the top half is planning. Thanks for playing in the contest.
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Date: 9/26/2015 2:55:00 PM
WOW CARRIE....delighted to be alive in your era.....Thanks....
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