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Innocent Love

The little fingers holding out for her hands to grab on fighting to be the best for a simple word of praise her tears made me cry and the angst I felt my tiny heart knew not the innocence of love. But what is this feeling I have its strange that stirs within me making my heart race and my body tingle with the surge of emotion leaving me breathless an incredible world I saw you and the world seemed to change your very presence made me tremble with need A need so fierce, I knew not for what A need to drink in your heady scent A need that crept from the pit of my stomach A need that makes me sweat and moan A need I have never felt so strong A need so pure to melt within you A need to be one, I know not what for This imminent need that was born captivated by this spell and in it I want to live on leave me not, do not enlighten me for this is where I want to be for with knowledge my innocence will be lost © Nadiya(16 May '15) * Honorable mention in the contest 'when love was innocent' by Justin Bordner on 18 May 2015

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Date: 12/9/2015 2:03:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write Nadiya - great to see you on soup today hope you will post something new soon ... miss you:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/9/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thank you dear Jan... I guess I will start writing once again shortly... hope you are doing well.. lov n hugs, nad
Date: 7/19/2015 5:55:00 AM
it really made my day...amazing poem...:)
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Date: 12/21/2015 9:43:00 PM
thank you Raarya... glad you liked it..
Date: 5/29/2015 12:42:00 PM
Very beautiful
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:08:00 AM
Thank you Etienne.. for reading my poem and glad you liked it
Date: 5/26/2015 1:14:00 PM
Love it like a heart on a hook
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:07:00 AM
Thank you dear Anthony... wishing you a nice day.. nad
Date: 5/24/2015 8:11:00 AM
Nad.. this is a fabulous write and a wonderful win.. Many congrats in a toughly judged contest!
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:07:00 AM
Dave, its a pleasure to read your comments.. thank you for the ever encouraging words... nad
Date: 5/19/2015 8:48:00 PM
beautiful write, congratulations on your win
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve.. glad you liked my pen
Date: 5/19/2015 5:36:00 PM
Good result here Poesy, congrats on your H M..'
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Joe... appreciate your wishes and visit
Date: 5/19/2015 9:25:00 AM
nice HM Poesy..... SKAT
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:06:00 AM
Thank you skat for all the visits on my poems...
Date: 5/17/2015 1:20:00 PM
how sweetly strong this piece is, poesy.. the pure intent of your lines amazes!.. huggs
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:05:00 AM
Thank you Nette... appreaciate your visit and comment... hugs, nad.. namaste
Date: 5/16/2015 3:44:00 PM
Ummm.. Love your innocent longing love.. A fabulous write!
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:03:00 AM
Thank you Dave.. your comments are always a pleasure to read
Date: 5/16/2015 2:48:00 PM
Poesy your poem is full of deep emotion and love, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, a perfect day
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:02:00 AM
thank you friend, appreciate your visit.. wish you a great day
Date: 5/16/2015 9:42:00 AM
AMAZING write, sweet Nadiya, This will do well in the contest. I love the build up to that amazing finish....innocence will be lost with knowledge. Hugs
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Date: 6/7/2015 12:01:00 AM
thank you dear Eileen.. innocence seems to fade away as man gains more knowledge....