Innocent

poor girl carries a babe though time is on her side secrets of the womb will reveal heartbeat 6/5/15

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2015 3:28:00 PM

I really liked this one .Good thinking on your part..Thanks for your participation in my contest.Congrats on your win.Sara

Judy Konos
Date: 6/12/2015 3:45:00 PM

thank you Sara...appreciate it...

Paul Callus

Date: 6/12/2015 11:21:00 AM

So this is the heartbeat of the innocent! Cleverly done, Judy! Congrats on this lovely win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2015 11:52:00 PM

yes, I remember this one and how much I liked it, Judy. BIG congrats to you.

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2015 3:49:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations........ SKAT

Judy Konos
Date: 6/11/2015 4:51:00 PM

thanks again and again....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2015 1:59:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA

Judy Konos
Date: 6/11/2015 4:51:00 PM

thank you destroyer....

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/10/2015 9:33:00 PM

This does paint a sad picture. Great cinquain! Congrats on your win, Judy! Love, Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/10/2015 6:52:00 PM

Very clever, Judy, and sadly, words that paint the fate of many. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2015 6:35:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 6/10/2015 2:48:00 PM

So little, says ever so much, James :) :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/6/2015 11:40:00 AM

Exquisitely sad and beautiful cinquian, Judy. A 7. Blessings for the contest!

Constance La France

Date: 6/6/2015 1:48:00 AM

Judy, beautifully penned

Judy Konos
Date: 6/6/2015 7:03:00 AM

well good morning to you and coming from a poet and I know it..I say thanks!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2015 11:35:00 PM

this is quite a thoughtful cinquain from you, Judy. I really like it.

Judy Konos
Date: 6/5/2015 11:47:00 PM

OUCH!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/5/2015 9:35:00 PM

Wow raw poignant and to the point, loved this!

Judy Konos
Date: 6/5/2015 11:46:00 PM

Thank You Arthur

Jan Allison

Date: 6/5/2015 1:33:00 PM

Oh I do love this Judy - such a clever cinquain:-) good luck in the contest:-) My footles contest is up:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 2:02:00 AM

you have time to footle around my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Judy Konos
Date: 6/5/2015 11:46:00 PM

Yes I saw your footles are up but my brain is not up to your foot...les thanks for the stop by....kiddo