Inner Beauty

"I have dipped my pen in the sublime, it is my gift to you"....A Rambling Poet

The youthful beauty of an unlined face,
Unsullied by the use that lies ahead
Has still the freshness of an unturned page.
A book to show its worth must have been read.
True fairness comes when beauty dwells within,
No need to fear effect of time’s swift pace.
Though  chance of fate can its bright radiance dim
And leave sad  mark on that beloved face.
Beauty untried is beauty quite unearned;
Fair to behold with worthiness unproved.
The cherished face with lines of living burned
Will to true lover surely be more loved.
The beauty not reflected in the glass
Remains when more apparent charms doth pass..

By: Joyce Johnson
								
lFor Constance , A Rambling Poet's contest  "Writing In The Sublime"			 
	Won a 7th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 12:20 PM
The lines that come with age add character to our faces, Joyce. I see both your outer and your inner beauty, dear. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, you surely dipped your pen in the sublime~~
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Writing in the Sublime" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:15 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Joyce
Onclaud Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 12:31 AM
this stirs the mind and engages the feelings… KUDOS to you for superb win,joyce..:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Congrats Joyce on your exciting win in the contest with this rare beauty of inner beauty my friend.. blessings and luv..enjoy..
George   Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 2:52 PM
sublimely profound dear, Joyce. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:26 PM
not reflected in the glass, more apparent charms doth pass, great poetry cousin Joyce, xo, Don
Soulfire Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Lovely insight into the deeper meaning of beauty, Joyce. Love the line, "cherished face with lines of living burned" It evoked strong images of beautiful women in my life - their life lines well marked. Cheers, ~Soulfire~
Wesley Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 11:45 AM
Ah, the sadness of change, it comes to all.. So beautifully said.
Falotico Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Very well written!!! Enjoyed as always your work..Michael
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June 25, 2011 at 8:33 AM
Nice job-well written!
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