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Indomitable Love

leaning ...... and falling my last thoughts of only you drifting in between your touch, my crash, rushing past- my soul racing to your side forever, in love never silenced heart be lost rising from the ash mere flesh all that disappears ...Dedicated to the memory of those we lost on 9-11...forever in our hearts

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Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/2/2016 6:39:00 AM

Very well written.

Skat A

Date: 12/29/2015 5:42:00 PM

JAMES, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/2/2010 1:59:00 PM

Written from the victim's viewpoint . Well done. congratulations. Joyce

James Fraser

Date: 4/2/2010 1:29:00 PM

James, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest, based on the tragic events of 9-11,2001 >> James

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/2/2010 1:02:00 PM

Yes......poetry says what we all felt...between each moment...and as you said, at the very last "unfortunately"....no word is large enough. Well done, James, congratulations on your honorable mention in Nathan's contest. Love, Carrie

Nathan Leccese

Date: 4/2/2010 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my 9-11 contest! Nate

Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/25/2009 2:30:00 PM

Wonderful poem. I can taste the sweet and sour. Wish you luck on the contest, bro.

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/13/2009 6:18:00 PM

I Like this... Tho' it is Sad... But We Do Wonder... What Is The Last Thought? MoonBee

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 9/11/2009 3:33:00 AM

your thoughts only of your woman,a soul racing to her side,very deep,Celina

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2009 10:21:00 PM

Sorry i haven't been onsite so much lately,im glad im back to read your poems...and this is so beautiful,i love this style..excellent--Charma

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/10/2009 8:04:00 PM

I am having no luck with this subject..you have penned a great one. The last line is so touching. BG

Ronald Bingham

Date: 9/10/2009 7:23:00 PM

James I apologize, I should have put in a post script alerting everyone this was a fictitious write. But I do thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind feelings. God Bless and good luck on Nathans contest. Ron