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Indisposed

Hair there, why cry, pull it out ..try!
Pretty YES on your head but nose?
God that’s gross you’re not a guy
Pull it out you’re indisposed!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2011 3:07:00 PM

Little humor to brighten our day..Congratulations..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/29/2011 7:14:00 PM

Yahhooo!! I knew this would do well....so funny!! :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/28/2011 8:23:00 PM

Gross...I loved it..congrats. BG

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2011 7:03:00 AM

Hair can grow anywhere else on the body and not just on top of the head. Good submission. No wonder it won for you in the contest. Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 3:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/28/2011 2:46:00 AM

Congrat's on your big win, Deb. Lainie

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/27/2011 10:02:00 PM

LOL! Great limerick, Deborah. - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Rick's "Bad Hair Day" contest. Best wishes, Kory

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/27/2011 7:44:00 PM

Many congratulations on this win Debbie with this very difficult meter.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2011 7:41:00 PM

WAY to GO, Deb. Loved this one. Congratultions.

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/27/2011 6:50:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Debbie

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/27/2011 6:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest....Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Deb

Ray Dillard

Date: 1/27/2011 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations on this fine poem. Very creative. RAY

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/27/2011 6:23:00 PM

Very funny Debbie. Congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/27/2011 5:52:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Bad Hair Day contest ..

Kash Poet

Date: 1/27/2011 5:25:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie on your big win !This goes to my FAVs to study the Trochaic Tetrameter form--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2011 7:29:00 PM

Very very unique Debbie ... terrific entry for the contest.. good luck luv.. Rick will be rolling in the aisle with this one ...

Bozhidar Pangelov

Date: 1/13/2011 11:14:00 AM

I greatly enjoyed this form. Welcome to one original http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpc-lfKIJWU&feature=related

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2011 12:08:00 AM

such a surprsing twist, deb... very " out of the box" and utterly imaginative!! nasal strands, lol!! love tis and best of winning wishes from me..:) nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2011 5:44:00 PM

Deb,a very unique approach to this contest! I am a great hair puller. I nearly killed my poor tweezed eyebrows and a few time I went after these nose hairs. The WORST ones to pull out. OUCHHHHH.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/12/2011 3:11:00 PM

Very funny Debbie ! The artist you are, but, ouch...that has to hurt dear poet; even the thought of writing this poem had to hurt ! *smiles* Have a great night, much love, james

Sidney Beck

Date: 1/12/2011 1:04:00 PM

Very funny hair/nose stuff....... I do so like funny poems and like to try writing them my self......Thanks for the invite to your competition and of course I will enjoy writing for it....by the way can I ask in your competition is it necessary to write about one's "foreign country" or can it be literally ANY POEM and ANY TOPIC ??

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2011 12:51:00 PM

now that is truly.....A BAD HAIR DAY LOL !!!

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 1/12/2011 12:07:00 PM

Hehe what a fun write but hope never get it as a problem! Thanks for your heads up/read....

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/12/2011 10:08:00 AM

Hi Debbie. Thanks for the help. I must pay more attention to detail. you describe the pain that you fair ladies go through to look good for us men who just allow ourselves to go to seed. best of luck in the contest and thanks again. Eamon

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