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In The Stars

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In The Stars

       Written in The Stars 

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Two hearts bleached by the sun
        A poem's - fallen wish
               The Love 
            Of A Life Time
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Majestic beams fall from heavens meadow
Two hearts stitched by the constellation
Under the moon's glow 
   You and I
Gazing up into the Starry Sky

This night we sit under the dazzling diamond dust
Our eyes feel and meet tonight 
Stars twinkle a poem of each paired heart
Listen......While......The God's Whisper!

What Is Love? 
They asked
A wish so gently by the stars 
Greeting young couples heart 
Poor but, in love
Mockeries of an old shadow
Light embracing this Auspicious moment 

-Aster Flares-
Intrigued by sad lovers tale
Two souls forever rich- 
Sharing eternity through celestial bliss
Gravitating in the world owned by the stars
A most unfortunate turn of events, 
Romeo & Juliet
Collapsing stars rising with a hymn 
From the moment they fell
Only to reveal how beautiful-- 
-- the stars in the dark
Ever so wealthy, around Orion's Belt
Reading notes on every rhyme, every heartbeat


Stars fall every eve entering the atmosphere
Seeping through the soul, making love a part of light
Permanent illusion
Fireflies Flaring up 
A passion that last longer than a moment

Each  zodiac unfolds
The stars tell you, who you are 
Gaze upon the eternity
Follow the Northern star
Beneath your peaceful splendor 
They will bow
Sunset and the evening star, 
"My Star Of Love" 
Like glitter dust upon a timeless shore
Never will the memory of love be gone
Look up at the stars tonight,
For somewhere out there 
I read about YOU in a poem.

By; PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 6/15/2015 2:11:00 AM
Lovely poem and pen of thoughts. Love this poem! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 3/14/2015 4:25:00 AM
What a loving beauty and a gem of a Poem you had placed and I missed it till now dear friend. It was a joy to read this beautiful Poem. Just Superb and a very heart soothing writes too PD. It goes as my favorite one also. I have placed a new type of poetic verse cum Song. Hope you would find it interesting and would let me know your comment. Love and best wishes always….Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful Poem. Very moving.
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Date: 7/23/2014 10:15:00 PM
Very nice imagery. you are very creative. - Kim
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:13:00 AM
Dear Linda, your poetry is highly metaphorical and philosophical. What i can say about is "in fact you are an artist). i miss you honestly. hae a visit and read my poems like portraying thy face, beauty upon beauty, written on a snowy day, an erotic poem...and leave a honest comment. yours fayaz bhat
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:58:00 PM
Beautiful my sister writer love your imagery, so romantic i won't look up at the stars the same lol. cheri
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:40:00 AM
Much to like in this piece - it's full of great description and emotion throughout.
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Date: 1/4/2014 1:54:00 AM
Thank u so much also my dearest sis. I'm in tears of joy esp. seeing you around here today. I/we love, care & adore you so much here. Remember a good sis & friend is always here for you. Take good care of yourself always. Good night now. Sleep well & sweet dreams! Biggest hugs to u your family! lovem4evr sis & BFF Leo
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:44:00 AM
Hi, my dearest sis! biggest hugs! How are u? Hope you're doing well. Are you still on vacation? Just came at soup today. Stopping by to read & enjoy again this stupendous write of yours before going around the soup. Adoring & embracing this as always! Thank u so much again for sharing! Have a great wkend to u & your family & sending u smiles and many hugs! tcare! lovem4evr,Leonora
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Date: 11/30/2013 4:08:00 PM
Don't ever listen to closely to any criticism Linda, cause I see the beauty of this poem, and I think it is wonderful that you write from your heart. Like a fish on a line. You got me hooked...Love....Roger
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Date: 11/23/2013 10:16:00 PM
I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in this one. You made a lot of heavenly allusions, although I must say that, at times, I felt a little lost among the stars. Still, the poem captured love and passion in a moving way. Nice work.
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:09:00 AM
Hi my dearest sis & loving BFF of mine. Stopping by again to read this stellar masterpiece of yours adducing the stellar talent of our soupstar & my most fave/greatest poet. Adoring and loving this as always. MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR TOP/GRAND WIN! Biggest hugs! Good night now my dearest sis. TYSM again for everything! May God bless u & your family always! Have a grace-filled day! lovem4evr, Leo
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:31:00 AM
U must have been a star while writing it! And u by ur words seem so......
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Date: 11/13/2013 12:15:00 AM
Love the win PD,CONGRATS!
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:18:00 PM
YOurs was shining with a star's brightness, PD. what a great winner this is. So creative!! Congrats on the top win.
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:38:00 PM
Very well deserved win. Congrats.
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, P.D.
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:27:00 PM
Majestic Linda ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:01:00 PM
No one does it like you...!!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) Congratulations Linda
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:03:00 PM
This is such an excellent winning poem...congrats!
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Date: 11/12/2013 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your fabulous win and fabulous poem. ~
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:39:00 AM
this is beautiful Linda...i love where you took the theme...congrats on your awesome win :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:20:00 AM
The stars pale in comparison to your artistic gifts. Congratulations on this well deserved first place win.
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:53:00 AM
congrats on a great win Linda
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Date: 11/7/2013 6:50:00 AM
The evening Star. "My Star of Love" I feel the Force in your words. And I feel the strength it gives.
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