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In The Moment - Imagist

birds calling
            drifting
     gliding
  soaring 
        in the sky
      falling
               falling
  dropping
       flying
          in circles
          calling . . calling
      in the azure
   blue
     blue
           sky . . . 

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June 18, 2019


Poetry/Imagism/In The Moment
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1157-622-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the contest,Your Choice (11) Imagist
sponsor, Brian Strand (Code 123)

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/24/2019 8:54:00 PM
Your poem delicately expresses such a breathtaking moment, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/26/2019 10:06:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations !
Date: 6/22/2019 10:32:00 PM
Congrats, Constance!
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/23/2019 2:47:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 6/21/2019 2:30:00 PM
Exquisite. I love watching birds and this was so vivid. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Jeanne
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:41:00 PM
Jeanne, thanks so much for the comment and congratulations !
Date: 6/21/2019 6:47:00 AM
Exquisitely done, Constance. So dainty and beautiful.
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM
Caren, thanks for the compliment ~
Date: 6/21/2019 4:20:00 AM
Your simple words paint a beautiful picture, Constance, congrats on your win. John
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM
John, thanks for the compliment and congrats !
Date: 6/21/2019 2:18:00 AM
Such a sweet image Constance, I can hear those dear little birds tweeting as they rise and fall - just beautiful and congrats on your top placement. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/21/2019 2:43:00 PM
Ann, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats ~
Date: 6/20/2019 3:28:00 PM
A lovely moment...takes the breath away!
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Dear Heart- Wiishkobe Ode
Date: 6/20/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim ~