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In the Moment - Imagist

birds calling drifting gliding soaring in the sky falling falling dropping flying in circles calling . . calling in the azure blue blue sky . . . _______________________ June 18, 2019 Poetry/Imagism/In The Moment Copyright Protected, ID 19-1157-622-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest,Your Choice (11) Imagist sponsor, Brian Strand (Code 123) First Place

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/24/2019 8:54:00 PM

Your poem delicately expresses such a breathtaking moment, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Constance La France
Date: 6/26/2019 10:06:00 AM

Susan, thanks for the nice comment and the congratulations !

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2019 10:32:00 PM

Congrats, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2019 2:47:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the congrats, appreciate ~

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/21/2019 2:30:00 PM

Exquisite. I love watching birds and this was so vivid. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Jeanne

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:41:00 PM

Jeanne, thanks so much for the comment and congratulations !

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 6:47:00 AM

Exquisitely done, Constance. So dainty and beautiful.

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM

Caren, thanks for the compliment ~

John Gondolf

Date: 6/21/2019 4:20:00 AM

Your simple words paint a beautiful picture, Constance, congrats on your win. John

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:42:00 PM

John, thanks for the compliment and congrats !

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/21/2019 2:18:00 AM

Such a sweet image Constance, I can hear those dear little birds tweeting as they rise and fall - just beautiful and congrats on your top placement. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2019 2:43:00 PM

Ann, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/20/2019 3:28:00 PM

A lovely moment...takes the breath away!

Constance La France
Date: 6/20/2019 6:10:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim ~