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In the Mirror of Life

When she was young,
                                                   
she would look into the mirror of life and just wonder.
     
Wondered what life would hold,
     
would she be rich or poor~married or single.
                 
Would happiness fill her life,
                                         
would all her dreams come true.
When she was middle-aged,
                                         
she would look into the mirror of life and just wonder.
     
Her life was now half over,
                                             
what did she have to show for it.
                                   
She is not rich or poor,
                                                 
still married after all the years.
                                     
She is still dreaming,
                                                     
still many dreams need to come true.
When she was in her golden age,
                                   
she would look into the mirror of life and just wonder.
     
Where did all the years and time go,
                             
it all went way too fast.
                                                 
She did not get to do all the things she wanted to do,
     
she proclaimed mirror it is all your fault.
                         
In the mirror of life,
                                                     
you are to blame.
 
Date Written:5/2/2022
1 Place
In the Mirror of Life Contest Judged:5/13/2022
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 5/13/2022 10:42:00 PM
You've penned a stellar poem my dear friend with a very good story leaving us beautiful thoughts to ponder on. Big Congrats on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing! Hugs Have a blessed day/weekend to my dear friend. God bless!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. "Thank You," for your very kind words. Glad you like my story/write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend......................
Date: 5/13/2022 5:21:00 PM
This is delighted Paula and so true. I enjoyed reading your free verse. Congratulations on your first place win. Cheers Anne :-)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2022 8:00:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this true write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend......................
Date: 5/13/2022 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on the well-deserved victory you've achieved. Paula, you penned such a magnificent poem. Blessings
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Your very kind words made my day. "Thank You" It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend......................
Date: 5/5/2022 10:40:00 AM
The continuity of this poem is ingenius.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/6/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your Very Kind Words. You Made my Day. "Thanks" Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed~day/weekend......................
Date: 5/3/2022 11:15:00 PM
Regrets of the past and fear of the future, mirror reveals how we did yet mature ~ enjoyed your musings, Paula, good luck for the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:32:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed this one. Yes, "Regrets of the past and fear of the future." So we are in the middle, the now/today time. One needs the mirror to tells them what they want to hear/see. Have a great/blessed day......................
Date: 5/3/2022 2:36:00 PM
Many reflections in the mirror of life. We see what we want to see, I think. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Paula. Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:29:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. The mirror tells what one wants to hear/see. Have a great/blessed day......................
Date: 5/3/2022 3:45:00 AM
lol My husband is like that. SOMEONE must be to blame for everything that doesn't go right in his life and he knows he has done his best so it must be someone else and since there is no one else but me it must be me. This is a beautiful but a little sad. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thanks for reading/writing. Yes, a little sad but so true at the same time. Glad you like it. Have a great/blessed day.........

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