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In the Garden of Eden

Butterfly I saw In the Garden of Eden Celebrates its beauty Colorful flowers to see God’s gift for you and for me The season of smile Trees wave its leaves for a while To show happiness Air filled with so much freshness Birds singing sweet lullaby Motif: Nature For Giorgio's "Impress Me V" contest 4th Place Winner Maria Paz Samelo

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Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/20/2014 9:57:00 AM

an amazing paradise... EDEN... well penned ,Paz.. CONGRATULATIONS!!!! ^__^

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/20/2014 5:20:00 AM

Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, maria

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2014 4:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Maria ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:07:00 AM

Maria, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:02:00 PM

Maria, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA

Skat A

Date: 3/7/2013 11:13:00 AM

Maria, an awesome win~Yours truly *SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:09:00 PM

Maria, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2012 1:57:00 AM

What a lovely write vividly describing the fantastic view of an Eden Garden. Is this for the contest? Well, wish you all the best and good luck always!!! love/hugs:)) Leonora

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/9/2012 2:29:00 AM