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In the Eye of the Beholder-POTD

Quote --The ugly girl cries in front of the mirror, She does not want to adorn herself as no one cares, Till her blind lover tells her how beautiful she looks, She hugs him, kisses him and finds her beauty in him. -- unknown An old sweater, stitched long ago by my wife’s loving hands, might feel old to some eyes—but to me it’s warmth and faith that still withstands. My novice painting endeavors, Laughed as worthy of hanging in the garage or a closet, The time and excitement I had working on them, Reflects my passion and an artwork of my dreams. Grandparent's face lined deep with time and laughter is scorned by those who only see scars; to me it’s a sky of constellations, each wrinkle a roadmap to the heart. The hillside shows its wounds to others— ash-choked ferns, a world burnt away. I see wild soul among the ruin— a story that the storm can’t fray. That old book, pages dog-eared and worn, might look shabby to a passer-by. But to me it glitters in amber light— a whispered memory that will never die. If ever voices deride what you hold dear, simply—gently—remember: The rose that blooms in midnight’s hush, The song known only by your mind, And the face that loves you best in this world— imperfect, true, and defined By the gaze that cherishes it. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

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Date: 8/6/2025 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet, on your POTD with this heartfelt exquisite poem. Nothing is more true than the profound thoughts you expressed with rich imageries.
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Date: 8/6/2025 1:22:00 PM
Congrats for POTD. So many things we truly value are indeed old, worn and not so attractive any more.
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Date: 8/6/2025 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "In the Eye of the Beholder" write/story. Hope you are OK... Have a very blessed day with your win...........
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Date: 8/6/2025 11:50:00 AM
' Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. ' This quote held truth when it was spoken and it still does today. Your thoughts are wonderful in every way. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/6/2025 10:48:00 AM
Back to offer my congratulations on your POTD honor, my friend. Yeah! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/6/2025 6:59:00 AM
Hello Jay, congratulations on winning POTD with your beautiful and heartfelt poem. An excellent write. Have a wonderful day as you celebrate.
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:48:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation...an outstanding poem well-deserving of the award.
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:17:00 AM
Straight from the heart! Profound quote too. Enjoyed your exquisite poem, Jay, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:07:00 AM
I too am touched by your wonderful poem Jay. Each wrinkle a roadmap to the heart, love that line, it’s a beautiful quote. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day Jay… Beryl
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Date: 8/6/2025 2:01:00 AM
"Grandparents' face lined deep with time and laughter is scorned by those who only see scars; to me it’s a sky of constellations, each wrinkle a roadmap to the heart." What a lovely stanza. I love this wonderful tribute to your grandparents. Love the whole poem. Glad to see it as POTD. Congratulations dear Jay ji. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 8/6/2025 1:12:00 AM
- Hurray...congrats on your p.o.t.d. Jay ... enjoy :) - hugs
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Date: 8/5/2025 4:11:00 PM
absolutely enjoyed this heartwarming poem...touched my heart, almost teary eyed. I especially liked the 2d verse--reminds me of the quilt my mother made me years ago. Although its frayed and worn, I cherish it, for her spirit is in each thread. Well done. Best wishes with the contest. Faving, Sara
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Date: 8/5/2025 4:09:00 PM
A FAV for my list, dear, Jay. Your words tell a true story, that many will relate to. To me, the signs of wear on anyone or thing, simply shows as badges of courage and a sign they or it has engaged in life and won. Blessings my friend. Good luck if for a contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 8/5/2025 11:40:00 AM
Oh, you made me emotional, Jay. I wasn't expecting such a heartwarming poem today! Love it__Anaya
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:45:00 AM
A Beautiful poem with rich imagery and many layers of interesting views
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Date: 8/5/2025 10:34:00 AM
- A heartwarming poem, Jay :) - hugs
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