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In the Echoes of Summer

` lost within the rhythmic tides where waves fall in quiet surrender misted melodies float the moistened sand tempting emotions beyond drifting dunes as I gaze upon an angelic silhouette, a sensual shadow against a quivering horizon feeling my breath escape in lingering sighs, the rush of the sea pulsating upon my flesh and I fade slowly into the euphoric beauty as two become one drenched in the echoes of summer ** Inspired by Sandra Adams poem "summer carries you in its fades"

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/20/2019 12:14:00 PM

Gorgeous write Chris! It's always great to be inspired! And it makes writing so much easier!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 12:22:00 PM

Thanks so much Brenda. I am glad you liked this one. It was fun to write.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/19/2019 10:34:00 PM

Another beautiful poem, Chris, it is so easy to fall back and feel the emotion you put into your verse. Hugs Eve

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eve

Hello There

Date: 9/19/2019 10:24:00 PM

fav...

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thanks : )

Constance La France

Date: 9/19/2019 5:31:00 PM

Chris, this is utterly lovely ...

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you so very much

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/19/2019 3:39:00 PM

The inspiration has brought out this beautiful poem! Wow! Lovely one Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thanks my friend. I am happy you liked it.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/19/2019 2:30:00 PM

WoW...You've been inspired.What a beautiful poem..So romantic.

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. I am thrilled you enjoyed this. Sometimes a poem inspires me and I just start writing. I appreciate you my friend.

Disco Freak

Date: 9/19/2019 2:19:00 PM

Brilliant poem, my friend!

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 3:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, I appreciate your comment.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/19/2019 1:38:00 PM

Wow. I am honored that my poem could inspire such a beautiful write. Love everything about this one including the title ... it has a magical pull to it and allures like the ocean, so sensual! Amazing write my friend :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 1:52:00 PM

Thank you Sandy for your kind words and for posting such a beautifully inspiring poem. Your words made writing this one easy. :)