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In the Dead of Winter

In the dead of winter, as the melted snow turns to ice, it is so cold the rocks have teeth and the logs perched above the river dangle long locks of icicle hair in front of their faces like teenagers hiding their eyes from the world. As the Earth’s numb breath passes over, even the canal covers itself with a single opaque sheet etched with crystal veins and ripples frozen in place that catch and distort the reflections of the trees in the faded light like an old leaded window. Nothing escapes its bite. It blows its bitterness across the wide water and chomps at the edges of the icy shore, shattering it into thousands of glistening shards that rhythmically clink together like chandeliers swaying in an empty room with open windows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 10:29:00 AM
Very descriptive and beautiful. Thank you for your comment on my "Playing the Game". I was so proud of my son for his empathy. I have remembered his words forgotten the game. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/15/2010 12:19:00 AM
Its been like this in England as well .Nice poetry Krista.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/14/2010 5:43:00 PM
So beautiful, but it gives me the shivers....as if I need to go and close those windows! :) Lovely writing, Krista! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/14/2010 3:19:00 PM
A breathtaking vision of the winter landscape is created in your poem, Krista. Awesome! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/14/2010 1:29:00 PM
wow... in my mind you have put the very image of winter! keep up the wonderful imagery! ------Ell
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