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In Still the Night

In still the night, the beaks slumber.
The weary wings, of great number,
In lightest twitch, upon the dark
Etching on oak, wait for dawn’s hark.
In common sleep - sigh encumber.

The scented air, lilacs cumber
With bluebird-lull, silent slumber.
No need to coax the dormant bark,
In still the night.

Quickly, stars found in low number.
Red guitar pick awakes slumber.
Birds nestle under branches’ ark.
A cloudy mist sets off a spark.
Storm’s cajole -  raindrops outnumber,
In still the night.
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M  Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 2:49 AM
Belated Congratulations Kim on POTD!! A beautiful poem full of beautiful imagery! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Deb! :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creative talent with us. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Agustin Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this... Thanks again for constantly cheering me with your uplifting comments. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 4:06 PM
You are most welcome! You are a great writer and you keep growing by using a variation of forms. God bless you, Sis in christ!
mysore Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 5:04 AM
congratulations dear poet. cheers.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Agustin Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Wow! Congrats... Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end... God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Thank you so much, Beata! :)
Evans Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations, Kim. Beautifully woven.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Thank you, Marilene!
May Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 8:09 AM
Very nicely penned Kim, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Crandall Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 1:27 PM
Beautiful flowing rondeau Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 2:07 PM
Thank you, David!
Anaya Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Belated congratulations on your POTD Kim! Missed this. Eight-word, form is challenging fun. Well-done! ~Anaya
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 8:22 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" in the eight word contest. Have a blessed day/week.....................
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Paula!
One Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 1:25 AM
Excellent use of the eight words and this is the more difficult form, so well done there.. I did this one too.. it was a bit annoying lol... congratulations on POTD..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Rather hard to use someone else’s eight letters…lol! Thank you, Silent!
Meadows Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 11:55 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Thank you, Daisy!
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 10:53 PM
Big congratulations to you Kim on the honour of POTD. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, Tom!
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:36 PM
I may be weary, yet I must not slumber. Without congratulations on POTD, my days might be numbered! Congrats, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Thank you, Gershon! Have a good night’s sleep!
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 5:34 PM
' The scented air, lilacs cumber. ' This fragrance is so calm and peaceful. It's one of my favorites. Your thoughts are so beautiful, Kim. Nature is very inspiring, indeed. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Brandy! Several years ago I made scented sachets to give out as gifts. Hugs ~ Kim
Roper Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 5:01 PM
Great poem, Kim, congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Hind Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Wow! You have POTD! I am glad I checked it today. That's wonderful, Kim. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:29 PM
Thank you, Paige! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 4:25 PM
Thank you, Paige! <3
Gorelick Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Kim! An engaging mellifluous flow. Blissful, rapturous design you have woven. My best, Robert
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Thanks for the compliment! Hugs
La France Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Kim, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY , honor, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Dear Kim! What a brilliant poem - both content and form!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:45 PM
Thank you so much, Mala!
Fowler Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Superb imagery and rhyming Kim. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:45 PM
I appreciate you, Linda!
Alex Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Wow! Another masterpiece. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Doll Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 6:19 AM
Kim, WOW such a fantastic poem. So deserving of POTD. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:47 PM
Thank you so much, Warren!
Elliott Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Beauteous night poem POTD, Kim. Bravo! Enjoy your special poetry day! Blessings :))))
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Thank you, Gina!
Kitchin Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Kim, a great poem with beautiful imagery, congratulations on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Thank you, Tania!
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