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In Quest of Immortality

I was! I am gone now. I did. I do no more. I spoke, and with a flow, but now, there is no encore! I have passed into silence, time has sprayed over me, a glazed layer of obscurity. photos remain of my visage, an album, with family too, but they have moved on, in their worldly quest, laying my memory to rest! My worth was their inheritance valued in gold and house, a few thoughts, a few tears, then they settled the score. Immortality was once my dream, of medals, awards and the rest, but in the blip of time realised, I was immortal through my deeds. a good gesture here and there, a loving hand to a few, books I wrote, lives saved, and my children who would be true. Can a passing cloud be immortal? or a flowing river claim to be? the cloud is immortal through the rain, that bathes and feeds the grain, a river flows through generations but is itself is born of the rain, flowers and crops they inundate, are immortal by their spray! Immortality is never of the self, but what is achieved in our time, a fruit is immortal by its seeds, and we by our good deeds!
Written 18/07/2021 Chantelle Anne Cooke Sponsored Immortality Yes or No poetry Contest Free verse

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Date: 7/19/2021 3:17:00 AM
This is a wonderful write, but I am sure the spirit goes on to Jesus when we leave the body. God bless you always. Your message is very clear and loving. Love, Gina
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/19/2021 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Gina! You are right!!:)
Date: 7/18/2021 6:20:00 PM
Seeds and deeds, alright. Great thoughts, my friend. G.L. in the contest, Krish. Cheers, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/20/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Gershon!! Hope you are well and had your Covid jabs!
Date: 7/18/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thought provoking verse Krish, I'm sure we live on in our children and grandchildren also the good deeds we performed whilst we are here. Hope you're enjoying the heatwave. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/18/2021 7:51:00 AM
Thanks Tom!! Yes, too hot even for South Indian like me! Out in the garden with water spraying around us! Jug of iced squash and more poetry to read and write!
Date: 7/18/2021 6:57:00 AM
Excellent message.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/18/2021 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Rama!!

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