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In My Mind's Eye

Shadows of a tree- for an hour eternity; Quiet, stillness,sleep, seconds doze as minutes froze; Slowly surely negatives develop a moment... of summer bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/29/2012 10:40:00 AM
Digital cameras have practically sent the darkroom into the Stone Age. Kodak recently filed for bankruptcy protection. Good imaginative write.
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Date: 1/28/2012 4:32:00 PM
You are brilliant Brian!!!oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/27/2012 9:21:00 PM
what a beautiful capturing of a moment, Brian. Just love your brevity!
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:29:00 PM
i love the awesome line, "...negatives develop..." that about says it all right there! I really enjoyed your poem tonight! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/27/2012 5:11:00 PM
Beautiful picture that developed from the Mind's Eye...Sara
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