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And in my deep meditation, I am searching with a breathless sigh; I am following the twisted path of a flowing stream, and birds twitter and tweet from the trees a sweet melodic symphony; a turtle rests on a rock and trees are trembling. Bees fly! And I am weeping crystal tears from my third eye, suddenly, I am in a garden beautiful and see a pretty church; in the center of the garden surrounded by flowers of all hues, there is a sign on the door that reads, DO NOT ENTER. I turn away and the flowers are now rows of gray headstones, somewhere, in this vast graveyard they all lay in rest; gone to dust, no more breaths, no more pain, no more ever. Now, by that flowing stream a thrush is singing sweetly. _________________________ August 21, 2019 Poetry/Verse/In My Meditation Copyright Protected, ID 19-1174-687-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, One Hundred and Thirty Six Words sponsor, John Lawless Third Place

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Date: 9/14/2019 7:26:00 AM
Wonderful imagery for a top win. congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:39:00 PM
Jeanne, thank you for the congrats
Date: 9/11/2019 8:24:00 AM
Expressive winning work. Way to go for the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 9/14/2019 7:39:00 PM
Sara, thanks so much for the congrats
Date: 9/10/2019 5:18:00 PM
Great job Constance. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2019 7:39:00 PM
Richard thanks for the great and the congrats
Date: 9/10/2019 4:49:00 PM
wow, I can see how you got rated high, dear friend. This is so lovely. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:40:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the lovely and congratulations
Date: 9/9/2019 8:56:00 PM
Wonderful win girl! Congrats;)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Brenda
Date: 9/9/2019 5:31:00 PM
DO NOT ENTER...... juxtaposition in Capital letters......a speed bump on the road to eternity. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:42:00 PM
John thank you for another great contest and for my placement
Date: 8/22/2019 1:43:00 PM
I love your poignant poem that seeks solace Constance. Your wonderful line "And I am weeping crystal tears from my third eye,"....brilliant! Did you marry? I notice you last name has an added name. xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:42:00 PM
Connie, thank your for the great comment and Wiishkobi Ode is Dear Heart in Ojibwe
Date: 8/21/2019 11:21:00 PM
Beautiful written thanks dear heart
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:43:00 PM
Kishan, thank you for the beautiful
Date: 8/21/2019 9:24:00 PM
Terrific effort, well written.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2019 7:44:00 PM
Timothy thank you for the terrific

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