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In My Meditation

And in my deep meditation, I am searching with a breathless sigh;
I am following the twisted path of a flowing stream, 
and birds twitter and tweet from the trees a sweet melodic symphony;
a turtle rests on a rock and trees are trembling.

Bees fly!  And I am weeping crystal tears from my third eye,
suddenly, I am in a garden beautiful and see a pretty church; 
in the center of the garden surrounded by flowers of all hues,
there is a sign on the door that reads, DO NOT ENTER.

I turn away and the flowers are now rows of gray headstones,
somewhere, in this vast graveyard they all lay in rest;
gone to dust, no more breaths, no more pain, no more ever.
Now, by that flowing stream a thrush is singing sweetly.

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August 21, 2019


Poetry/Verse/In My Meditation
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1174-687-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, One Hundred and Thirty Six Words
sponsor, John Lawless 

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcgee Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Wonderful imagery for a top win. congrats!
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Jeanne, thank you for the congrats
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Expressive winning work. Way to go for the contest. Congrats. Sara
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Sara, thanks so much for the congrats
Lamoureux Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 5:18 PM
Great job Constance. Congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Richard thanks for the great and the congrats
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2019 at 4:49 PM
wow, I can see how you got rated high, dear friend. This is so lovely. Congratulations.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Andrea, thanks for the lovely and congratulations
Chiri Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 8:56 PM
Wonderful win girl! Congrats;)
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Thanks Brenda
Lawless Avatar
September 9, 2019 at 5:31 PM
DO NOT ENTER...... juxtaposition in Capital letters......a speed bump on the road to eternity. Thanks for participating in the contest.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:42 PM
John thank you for another great contest and for my placement
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:43 PM
I love your poignant poem that seeks solace Constance. Your wonderful line "And I am weeping crystal tears from my third eye,"....brilliant! Did you marry? I notice you last name has an added name. xxoo
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:42 PM
Connie, thank your for the great comment and Wiishkobi Ode is Dear Heart in Ojibwe
Sharma Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Beautiful written thanks dear heart
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Kishan, thank you for the beautiful
Mcguire Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Terrific effort, well written.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 7:44 PM
Timothy thank you for the terrific
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