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In My Hot Air Balloon

Tranquility surrounds me once my basket lifts from ground. I drift up to azure sky. Sailing wind, I breathe a trail of clouds. March 2, 2022 For Chantelle Anne Cooke's Lind30nr Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/30/2022 4:50:00 PM
A fun ride. Thanks for taking us along through your poetry, Andrea. Bill
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:55:00 PM
Great write, Andrea, congratulations on your win... I had a friend that for his 100-year-old mom he sent her up on a hot air balloon .. she was on seven heaven.
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:57:00 AM
I have always wanted to fly up in a hot air balloon with someone expert at flying them, of course. A lovely winning entry Andrea. Congratulations. I hope you are having a wonderful St. Patrick’s Day. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:29:00 AM
Sheer delight Andrea! Taking us up, up and away into a place of tranquil serenity. Congratulations on your win. This is such a fun form. We have Robert's genius to thank. Blessings!
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:42:00 AM
"I breathe a trail of clouds" - Great work as usual. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2022 12:08:00 AM
This made me drift off to dreamland.
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Date: 3/4/2022 6:11:00 PM
Very nice and peaceful Andrea :)
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Date: 3/3/2022 10:45:00 AM
Drifitng along with dreams stiffled by hot air! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 3/3/2022 9:54:00 AM
I can see the balloon going up high.... great verse. Good luck in Chantelle's contest.
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Date: 3/3/2022 8:48:00 AM
So delicate and breezy Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2022 11:56:00 PM
Floating and flying, great sensations it must give, I guess:) amazing one, Andrea:)
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Date: 3/2/2022 9:36:00 PM
I've never been up in a hot air balloon... have you? It seems very quiet and peaceful, more like floating than flying. I really like your 4th line.
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Date: 3/2/2022 6:55:00 PM
Sounds amazing, nice poem <3
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Date: 3/2/2022 6:28:00 PM
Andrea, I like you poem as I felt like I was flowing in it. Well written.. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/2/2022 4:57:00 PM
Yup, that works nicely, Andrea!
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