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In My Heart

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Within the periphery of my heart I have mystic visions of you. With every rhythmic beat I feel your ecstatic warmth. With every spontaneous surge I perceive your seductive smile. With every hot kiss, I feel it’s just a flirting mood. With every impulsive hug I fear your ticklish tease. Please take my troubled heart. Just make it whole but stop the torrid torment of unsatisfied promised dreams.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/23/2021 9:57:00 AM

Contrasts of the heart!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/23/2021 3:10:00 AM

Sad when profound feelings are not returned..Delice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/22/2021 3:01:00 AM

A short but powerful poem, Victor, especially the last line is quite impactful:)

Valsa George

Date: 12/21/2021 11:09:00 PM

'The torrid torment of unsatisfied promised dreams'- What a powerful expression Victor! The girl doesn't seem to reciprocate in the way he expects !Probably she will come round listening t o his passionate crooning ! Well articulated, dear friend!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/22/2021 3:08:00 AM

Anselmo Boles

Date: 12/21/2021 3:31:00 PM

Yes. Sometimes, one's vision of the other is misinterpreted by the one who envisions a real possibility. If this is fiction, it's well thought out!...ab

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2021 1:12:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for dropping by and for the prayers. Our son-in-law has gallstones. They are going to keep him overnight. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2021 1:07:00 PM

hmm, from the picture and some of your words, I think the guy is not reading body language very well or something.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/21/2021 12:16:00 PM

Perhaps she'll hear his plea and love will blossom at last! A lovely poem and picture. :)

Judy Ball

Date: 12/21/2021 11:28:00 AM

Hmmmm Sounds like a young man in love and a girl who isn't quite sure yet. Nice job here Victor. God Bless, JB

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/21/2021 9:24:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Victor. It oozes the pain of unrequited love. I love the way you formatted it, too. I hope someday you will find your promised dreams come true!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/21/2021 8:44:00 AM

I hope she accepts the roses, as a symbol of undying love, nicely penned dear romantic :)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/21/2021 8:35:00 AM

seductive and torment. is love really like this ... YES! for moments. :) Very good write my friend with the twist at the end. Hugs Eve

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/21/2021 8:10:00 AM

A beautiful and tightly felt love poem. Wonderfully written.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/21/2021 6:22:00 AM

You have typically acquired an enviable reputation for meticulously crafting such poems, Victor. An outstanding representation of the strain occurs when feelings have not yet extended an active state of equilibrium. Throughout each sentence, one can clearly detect the tone of your beating heart—greetings, dear friend.

Buhagiar Victor
Date: 12/21/2021 8:48:00 AM

I have dark poems I have to post later on. Hope you'll like them. They are generally fiction.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/21/2021 5:10:00 AM

You are a master in writing verses apt for the picture Victor, this too, is so well penned... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/21/2021 4:25:00 AM

A charming depiction of struggle when emotions don't quite feel the harmony yet. Every line displays the voice of pulse --whether in kiss, hug, or tease. Well written, as always, Victor.