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In my dream . . . a beautiful white stallion is galloping the rider is native . . . muscled and handsome with flowing hair feathers entwined he beckons . . . come . . . then, I am a native girl wearing a soft beaded doe skin dress my hair black as the night we caress, caress laying tangled and I trace his battle scars as he kisses my hair and lips until dawn when, weeping my loss . . . I fly away home _______________________ December 16, 2015 Poetry/Canzone Entered in the contest. One OF Your Best, sponsor Rob Carmack Judged 12/2015 Sixth Place

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Date: 1/13/2016 11:11:00 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:12:00 AM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations ~
Date: 1/11/2016 6:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful romantic write, Constance! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Kim thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations ~
Date: 1/8/2016 7:40:00 PM
Broken, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:29:00 PM
Skat thanks for the congrats and the awesome ~
Date: 1/7/2016 2:19:00 PM
Oh My... Broken Wings, what a lovely dream! How I enjoyed reading it! Congrats on your win. From Jean
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:31:00 PM
Jean, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~
Date: 1/7/2016 1:42:00 PM
Love the dreamy romantic effect, Constance!
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:31:00 PM
Balveen, thanks for the lovely comment ~
Date: 1/7/2016 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest! It is a really good one Broken Wings :) -*smiles*
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:32:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles ~
Date: 12/6/2015 9:31:00 AM
oh how dreamy Broken Wings - I don't know where to begin :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:36:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the dreamy, and the visit ~

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