Constance La France Poet Free verse

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He Beckons Me To Come

In my dream . . .  
        a beautiful white stallion is galloping  
   the rider is native  . . . muscled and handsome
                with flowing hair
      feathers entwined
he beckons  . . .  come . . .   
                 then, I am a native girl 
wearing a soft beaded doe skin dress
        my hair black as the night
                    we caress, caress
laying tangled
             and I trace his battle scars  
as he kisses my hair and lips
                              until dawn
when, weeping my loss . . .  I fly away home 

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December 16, 2015

Poetry/Canzone

Entered in the contest. One OF Your Best, 
sponsor Rob Carmack Judged 12/2015

Sixth Place

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Poet Destroyer A January 13, 2016 at 11:11 PM BROKEN, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~ Constance La France January 14, 2016 at 7:12 AM Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations ~

Kim Merryman January 11, 2016 at 6:33 PM This is a beautiful romantic write, Constance! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Love, Kim Constance La France January 12, 2016 at 8:37 AM Kim thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations ~

Skat A January 8, 2016 at 7:40 PM Broken, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT Constance La France January 8, 2016 at 8:29 PM Skat thanks for the congrats and the awesome ~

Jean Mcloughlin January 7, 2016 at 2:19 PM Oh My... Broken Wings, what a lovely dream! How I enjoyed reading it! Congrats on your win. From Jean Constance La France January 7, 2016 at 2:31 PM Jean, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~

Balveen Cheema January 7, 2016 at 1:42 PM Love the dreamy romantic effect, Constance! Constance La France January 7, 2016 at 2:31 PM Balveen, thanks for the lovely comment ~

Beautiful Scars January 7, 2016 at 10:43 AM Congrats on your placement in the contest! It is a really good one Broken Wings :) -*smiles* Constance La France January 7, 2016 at 2:32 PM Laura, thanks for the congrats and the smiles ~

Jan Allison December 6, 2015 at 9:31 AM oh how dreamy Broken Wings - I don't know where to begin :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Constance La France January 7, 2016 at 2:36 PM Jan, thanks for the dreamy, and the visit ~