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For the Echo, Enduring, Empty Poetry Contest of Constance La France

Empty Rooms - The Design Cure

In His Empty Room

“In my empty heart – only memories” by poet Today our mother had his bed removed and took posters down – even things he’d drawn depicting stuff of which she’d disapproved. Those posters that revealed his heart – all gone! She took his dresser out, and all his clothes she folded up to donate to Good Will. His nice suits in the closet – even those - as well as knick-knacks on the window sill! I understand the pain she’s going through. What good is there in taking all away? The rest of our family's grieving too. I press to my face a saved shirt of grey. It was his favorite. In his empty room, my tears release. I’m standing in a tomb.
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Kerr Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your success with this touching and truly meaningful poem Howard
Woods Avatar
June 17, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Very touching and sad...I too struggled with letting go of the possessions of those who passed. You've captured that feeling here so well. Xo P.s. soupmail ;)<3
Hamilton Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 2:02 PM
A very touching sonnet Andrea, nice to see you on top of the winners list!
Andresen Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 11:00 AM
- Back with a congrats, Andrea :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Emptiness often accentuates the presence. Very nicely done Andrea. Congratulations. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 4:59 AM
My Dad is the opposite. He has kept all my Mom’s things where she left them. Your sonnet shows the fullness of emptiness. Things gone…memories remain. Congrats with a first place.
Guptar Avatar
June 15, 2025 at 3:10 AM
Back with congratulations poet friend on your top with a lovely sonnet, that is a reminder to many of us. Time heals most wounds to some extent. Healing also comes from looking inwards. Wish you a soulful day.
Jones Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations poetess!
Guptar Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 11:33 AM
A very emotional sonnet poet friend. Wish you all the best in the contest. By the way isn`t one line missing. Cheerful weekend ahead.
Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 11:38 PM
Thanks. It got left off somehow in my copy/ pasting.
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 9:58 AM
- A very touching poem, Andrea - ... memories completely removed :( - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Beaufort Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Andrea, you did a lovely job describing the feeling of loss and also not having control over it. Since each person's response will be different, one hopes that perhaps a family would discuss the steps and consequences that would occur when removing memories and traces of a loved one. There's isolation described here. I've heard experts talk about grief, and they seem to say that what we can do to talk about the deceased accomplishments and personality helps keep them alive in our hearts.
George Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Very touching and intimate. After a dear one's death, it is a usual practice to clear his/ her room of all the belongings, may be because those things will remind one of his/her absence more and more.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Some people prefer to keep things. I think keeping a few things is best
Hawley Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 7:39 PM
That's just sad! Puts me in mind of emptying out the house after mom died. Your last line just sad.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 9:13 PM
Thanks. I wanted it to be sad
Hind Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 7:27 PM
This touched me. Was this her son? My condolences and I am sorry for your loss.
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Thanks. I was imagining being the sister to a brother who died unexpectedly
Bauer Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 12:23 PM
very touching and sad, but beautifully written, andrea...
Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so much
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