In Her Life

Of all the sorrows that so govern her generous heart,
	Her love is the most unfair thing breaks her apart;
	In her life everything is already signed and sealed –
	And she evermore solemnly griefs her soul appealed
	To cheat, to relinquish, or to commit suicide and die
	The death that shall liberate her of her perpetual cry.
	Has providence deserted her, so unkindly in all facets of life
	That she so feels old, unhappy and like a desperate housewife?
	For alone she weeps, breathless with melancholy; her pouring tears
	Desolate with bitterness, anger and incessant grief of discovered fears.
	Her heart is weak, her soul is weaker –her life is a scornful jest;
	No endless joy, or liberty of love	(a nice little girl by love depressed.)
	       ‘Tis hard to dissever when love & pity have been merged in dim,
	       When all that she wants is to love and to be fairly loved by him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 7:05 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
Semenya Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 5:47 AM
Profuse gratitude Mr Makama, i will keep on writing.
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:23 AM
This is touching and comes with a feeling of resignation and sadness. Emotions flow strongly. Well done, Choene. #7 Congrats for POTD!! // paul
Semenya Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:25 AM
Sorry Paul, meant to say Paul and said Anne. Thanks very much ey
Semenya Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:23 AM
Thanks a lot Anne, I feel so blest. I'm just glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes Choene
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 3:34 AM
- A moving and beautiful poem, Choene - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
Semenya Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:27 AM
Hello Anne, much appreciated is your wonderful comment. Hope you read more and more of my work and I hope it never disappoints. Best wishes, Choene
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 2:12 AM
Hi Paul, such a heartfelt poem I enjoyed so much and can identify with for sure. We have to realize our muses do take a vacation from time to time! But your talent is always there my friend. Congrats on your POTD!
Semenya Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 5:50 AM
I am Choene by the way, but thanks a lot anyway!
Nunez Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 10:41 PM
Beautiful and sad, Choene. Congratulations on your POTD! :)
Semenya Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 5:37 AM
Thanks a lot Kim; you can say that again ''Beautiful and sad''; very sad indeed.
Bateman Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Hello Choene!! I'm very pleased to see your sonnet selection was featured as "POTD." Very-Well Done!! Continued best wishes, Gary
Semenya Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Thanks again Gary, You can be pleased but not as pleased as I am right now; I'm very proud of myself. It's so unbelievable! Regards, Choene
Williams Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 12:26 PM
This poem inferred sadness, but I find there is sadness in love and the reverse. Congratulations on your featured poem of the Day.
Semenya Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Well thanks Marilyn, very much appreciated. This poem is so moving that it literally makes me weep everytime when I read it. When I wrote it, I was very sad due to what I personally witnessed recently, terribly sad. I write what I feel and not what I think. I hope my work never disappoints. Best always, Choene
La France Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:15 AM
Choene, your poem is staggering with its raw emotion, overwhelming in sadness, 7, and congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day, well deserved
Semenya Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Gratitude Broken Wings, I appreciate it. I just hope things get better for ''her'' ey. Best always, Choene
Roper Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:07 AM
Beautiful piece a 7, and Congratulations on Poem of the Day
Semenya Avatar
May 7, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Oh thank you ever so much Eve, it really means a lot to me to know that my work touches so many people. And o yeah, she cried when I read her this poem! it really touched her too! Best wishes, Choene
Bateman Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 5:41 AM
Hello Choene!! A most powerful Sonnet write here with a most compelling message. Very Well-Done Sir!! A "7" + "FAV"!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. I will be mailing out the book very soon to you!!) Continued Best Wishes . . . GB!!
Semenya Avatar
May 6, 2015 at 6:05 AM
Hi Gary, much appreciated man. Thanks for ''7'' + ''FAV''!! O yeah, I'll be waiting with utmost relish to receive and read it. I hope the sales are skyrocketing (ha ha ha). Best always, Choene!
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