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In Her Life

Of all the sorrows that so govern her generous heart, Her love is the most unfair thing breaks her apart; In her life everything is already signed and sealed – And she evermore solemnly griefs her soul appealed To cheat, to relinquish, or to commit suicide and die The death that shall liberate her of her perpetual cry. Has providence deserted her, so unkindly in all facets of life That she so feels old, unhappy and like a desperate housewife? For alone she weeps, breathless with melancholy; her pouring tears Desolate with bitterness, anger and incessant grief of discovered fears. Her heart is weak, her soul is weaker –her life is a scornful jest; No endless joy, or liberty of love (a nice little girl by love depressed.) ‘Tis hard to dissever when love & pity have been merged in dim, When all that she wants is to love and to be fairly loved by him.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/27/2015 7:05:00 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 10/21/2016 5:47:00 AM
Profuse gratitude Mr Makama, i will keep on writing.
Date: 5/8/2015 5:23:00 AM
This is touching and comes with a feeling of resignation and sadness. Emotions flow strongly. Well done, Choene. #7 Congrats for POTD!! // paul
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/8/2015 5:25:00 AM
Sorry Paul, meant to say Paul and said Anne. Thanks very much ey
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/8/2015 5:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne, I feel so blest. I'm just glad you enjoyed it. Best wishes Choene
Date: 5/8/2015 3:34:00 AM
- A moving and beautiful poem, Choene - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/8/2015 5:27:00 AM
Hello Anne, much appreciated is your wonderful comment. Hope you read more and more of my work and I hope it never disappoints. Best wishes, Choene
Date: 5/8/2015 2:12:00 AM
Hi Paul, such a heartfelt poem I enjoyed so much and can identify with for sure. We have to realize our muses do take a vacation from time to time! But your talent is always there my friend. Congrats on your POTD!
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 10/21/2016 5:50:00 AM
I am Choene by the way, but thanks a lot anyway!
Date: 5/7/2015 10:41:00 PM
Beautiful and sad, Choene. Congratulations on your POTD! :)
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/8/2015 5:37:00 AM
Thanks a lot Kim; you can say that again ''Beautiful and sad''; very sad indeed.
Date: 5/7/2015 7:59:00 PM
Hello Choene!! I'm very pleased to see your sonnet selection was featured as "POTD." Very-Well Done!! Continued best wishes, Gary
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/7/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thanks again Gary, You can be pleased but not as pleased as I am right now; I'm very proud of myself. It's so unbelievable! Regards, Choene
Date: 5/7/2015 12:26:00 PM
This poem inferred sadness, but I find there is sadness in love and the reverse. Congratulations on your featured poem of the Day.
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/7/2015 8:21:00 PM
Well thanks Marilyn, very much appreciated. This poem is so moving that it literally makes me weep everytime when I read it. When I wrote it, I was very sad due to what I personally witnessed recently, terribly sad. I write what I feel and not what I think. I hope my work never disappoints. Best always, Choene
Date: 5/7/2015 8:15:00 AM
Choene, your poem is staggering with its raw emotion, overwhelming in sadness, 7, and congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day, well deserved
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/7/2015 8:23:00 PM
Gratitude Broken Wings, I appreciate it. I just hope things get better for ''her'' ey. Best always, Choene
Date: 5/7/2015 8:07:00 AM
Beautiful piece a 7, and Congratulations on Poem of the Day
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Choene Alley Semenya
Date: 5/7/2015 8:25:00 PM
Oh thank you ever so much Eve, it really means a lot to me to know that my work touches so many people. And o yeah, she cried when I read her this poem! it really touched her too! Best wishes, Choene
Date: 5/6/2015 5:41:00 AM
Hello Choene!! A most powerful Sonnet write here with a most compelling message. Very Well-Done Sir!! A "7" + "FAV"!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. I will be mailing out the book very soon to you!!) Continued Best Wishes . . . GB!!
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Date: 5/6/2015 6:05:00 AM
Hi Gary, much appreciated man. Thanks for ''7'' + ''FAV''!! O yeah, I'll be waiting with utmost relish to receive and read it. I hope the sales are skyrocketing (ha ha ha). Best always, Choene!

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