In Clover Green

In clover green we lay, our eyes on a bouquet of white and wooly flowers, heaven's grand display. As each bud drifted by, as if to make us sigh, they changed into a downy heart in azure sky - the perfect prelude to romance that new March day. Consumed by passion play; our hair in disarray, we heard above us in the tree a squawking jay. He seemed to want to split us up; we'd not comply! In clover green we lay. We felt like children savoring a sweet parfait, who linger in that special place they want to stay. We pledged a love that no one ever could defy and never questioned what would be should springtime die. Inhaling scent of heather and each blossomed spray, in clover green we lay. For PD's Any GREEN theme Poetry Contest
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Turner Avatar
May 15, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Nicely penned Andrea. Nothing like clover:)
Idudje Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Just like a film to neural cubicle Bravo Madam!!
Drowley Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 10:24 AM
Andrea, A beautiful picture. Congratulations, you have won again. You have great talent with the pen. Keep up the excellent work! David
Neumann Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Absolutely beautiful ...
Watt Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Andrea, I think this was one of favorites in your Carousel chapbook. So nice to read it again and enjoy the sights and sounds of springtime romance. Congrats on your #1 win!
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:14 PM
the poem IS well written and pretty. Something about this form bugs me....It isn't you, so don't go getting crappy:) I know you wont tho! Hey I wish some of these poems in contests didn't have to have the same names, I read like 20 Wanderlusts and it confuses the heck out of me. I know that has nothing to do with this poem, but that would make too much sense for me to type something that was relevant, Right?! Take care, Keep writing. Hey I see a TON of FOOTLES. Is that yir idea, ala BrianStrand?
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 10:10 PM
I thought Id read this before, But after reading, I don't think so, It is not my favorite, normally I wouldn't say that, but I know you know it is not a Negative remark...it mostly just pertains to me and certain form not resonating with my reading patterns, I don't have the best reading ability....ANd Maybe I have told you this before, BUt That is one of the main reasons I am drawn to writing. It is a challenge. You prob. can relate bc I think u enjoy challenges of contests! Maybe I am way off?
Babcock Avatar
June 12, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Young love floating on a spring day. Nice one. love phyl
Cogan Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 7:32 AM
Nice words as ever, Andrea.
Merrill Avatar
April 12, 2014 at 1:15 AM
This is a lovely poem, Andrea. I like it very much. What endearing wordplay and imagery. "Inhaling scent of heather..." What a nice line. Hugs xo mel :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 8:27 PM
I knew this was going to take top honors Andrea. Big Congrats on your wonderful win!
Sirak Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Beautiful memories resurrected here. To be young, in love, with romance floating on the breeze and thinking the spring would go on forever.
Smith Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Wonderful Andrea. I wish could linger in that special place..Congratulations
Johnson Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 12:55 PM
very pretty Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
May Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 11:30 AM
Beautiful write...congrats on the win
Stephens Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Hi Andrea, A certain winner. Loved your excellent phrasing throughout and the springtime colour green was clearly defined. Congrats. Regards Theresa xx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 2:22 AM
Hi another great write congratulations Andy xx
Kimathi Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 12:59 AM
Showers of applause to you Andrea. You always have a masterpiece under your sleeves, lol. ^_^
Ryerson Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Congrats and I have no CLUE as to how to write these forms of poetry but you have most definitely made me sigh and my hair is in rather shocking disarray as well. Sadly, it's only pillow-hair...
Carter Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 10:50 PM
This is really cool and flows very well. I love the squawking jay part it seems hilarious to imagine it in a literal sense. And I really like the last two lines it really ends the poem on a beautiful note.
Watson Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 9:52 PM
What did I tell you . lol Thoroughly deserved kiddo.
A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 9:30 PM
ANDREA,............... THIS IS MY FAV... OF ALL THE NUMBER #1 POEMS.... HOWEVER... I WUV THEM ALLLLLL.... HUGS... PD
Austin Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 10:48 AM
Ah yes, to see the clover once again. These two are lovers regardless the season - right? Love, daver
Watson Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Thought my effort was reasonable until I read this , Off to bed with a bottle of the Irish to sulk now , lol
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 5:23 PM
This is a lovely entry Andrea which should do wonderfully in the contest.
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