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In Bloom

The bee said to the rose, I need to make some honey. The beautiful white rose bud was embarrassed, she blushed red. Date Written:2/20/2023 "3 Place"

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/8/2023 10:51:00 AM

Very cute. A sly smile from the bee makes the rose blush. So creative Paula. Congratulations on your win. Sweet blessings to you!

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2023 11:55:00 AM

Lovely write Paula, Congrats on your win in my contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:23:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "In Bloom" fun write. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a great day writing away.........

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/6/2023 6:53:00 PM

Great play of words, Paula! Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my play on words with my "In Bloom" fun write. Have a great day writing away............................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/6/2023 6:39:00 PM

Paula, a cute one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my cute rose write. Have a great day writing away............................

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/6/2023 6:26:00 PM

A lovely and well-crafted poem, Paula. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/8/2023 9:18:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a great day writing away............................

FJ Thomas

Date: 2/25/2023 7:12:00 PM

This one will definitely bring a smile to the reader. A clever beauty it is Paula. A favorite even I dare say.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. A favorite??? Thanks. You made my day. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Smiles are free so give them away. Have a great day writing away............................

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/23/2023 3:58:00 PM

cute, Paula, great word play.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write. Have a great weekend writing away............................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2023 7:55:00 PM

She's an old-fashioned rose, I see. No 'second-hand' rose here!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2023 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my rose write. Yes, she is an old-fashioned rose. The best can to have in a vase. Hahaha... Have a great weekend writing away............................

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2023 1:52:00 PM

One word description, cute:) You made me smile Paula. Good luck!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/25/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. I am glad you like my cute write. It is great to hear I gave you a smile. They are free. Here catch, another smile. Have a great weekend writing away............................