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In Balance

You are a safari, but I wonder can you see the vision, what I think of when you look at me; Your eyes are like cliff diving; You push me to an edge, Ask me to look so hard before jumping again and again; You’re a bit like the Nile, Ferocious and nourishing; An open book yet shrouded in mystery; Perfect rain, perfect sun you’re a piece of the Savanna dangerously inviting, Wild, and completely in balance.

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Date: 6/30/2020 12:36:00 AM
I love the contrasts in this metaphoric beauty.
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Date: 6/29/2020 7:55:00 PM
theres a jungle in my identity....that exists in pure serenity....all are welcome to come to the experience of me....and realize that respect is the only fee....your heart will be touched, i am sure of that....because i Allow God To Shape The Way i Act....very inspiring melani....;)
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 6/29/2020 10:18:00 PM
Wow. That’s beautiful. :D

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