In Another Time

Way back then when I was ten,
those were happy days:
Staying out till it got dark;
kickball was the craze!

Taking walks or riding bikes,
how we loved to go
into town, buy some snacks
or see a picture show.

Late at night in the bedroom,
we’d be whispering.
Dad yelled, “Girls, get to sleep!” but
we kept giggling.

Shouts of joy when school was out!
We could all foresee
three months spread with sun and fun -
our short destiny!

Spraying one another with
hoses felt so cool.
Or we’d spend allowance on
Weed Park Swimming Pool.

Baseball, fairs, church camp, and
picnics where we’d meet
cousins, aunts and uncles -
Such times were a treat.

Family vacation meant 
in OUR car were ten!
Not too comfortable, yet I’d
do it all again!

In September, back to school
we all had to go.
Halloween, which I loved, was
‘round the corner though.

Then at last, Christmas parties!
Also I was fond
Of sledding over snow or
skating on the pond.

But my fondest memory
was with family
simply eating popcorn with
Sunday night TV.


For Caren Krutsinger's  'Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gentry Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win with this trip back to what sounds like my childhood at 10. Well done. I enjoyed.
Sergi Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Hi Andrea: Great win! It's interesting to acknowledge what fun we created no matter what generation we lived in.
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 7:31 AM
happy snippets of childhood, andie.. big congrats!..huggs
Lane Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Great write and a winner, Andrea. Congratulations.
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 12:41 AM
Love your trip through the year, Andrea, and finishing off in such a loving way. Congrats! Viv x
Turner Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Back to say congratulations and thanks for letting us into your life:) Peace
Deschler Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 8:05 PM
I liked how you wrote about different joys from throughout the year when you were ten. Kickball and skating were crazes during my childhood too... Congrats on a win with this beautiful poem! Thanks for entering, Andrea :)
Hicks Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 6:54 PM
I've done most of those things except for skating on the pond! What a wonderful childhood you must have had. Now you got me feeling all nostalgic and stuff ...
Thirtyseven Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:19 AM
You've captured innocence here, and laid it out so elegantly. Best of luck in the contest.
Beaufort Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 6:42 PM
A good life you had. Your disposition is quite good also. May I complement you on that? We make the best of it, do we not? The way we look back is a huge reflection on who we are now.
Nehls Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Yes Andrea, those were the good old days for sure. You brought them to memory and made it so easy to read. Very nice, my friend.... Robert.
Maverick Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 12:29 PM
You have very rich memories here displayed Andrea, I really like this indeed.'
Henderson Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Sounds like the "good ole" times Andrea. Enjoyed the read today.-- Chas
Laurie Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Hello Andrea ... really enjoyed reading your memory lane when ten and crikey, there is so much I can relate to - Lindsay
Walker Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 8:05 AM
I love all those memories too. Not the popcorn one though, it was agony with not wanting it and everyone around me making mouth noises eating it.
Garg Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 5:32 AM
How! I forgot to mention what you mentioned in stanza 3..Great poem. Good luck.
Muideen Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 4:48 PM
I'm very happy to drop by MA. Thank you for sharing your memories of youth days. Stay blessed.........A.M.
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 3:17 PM
- Good loving memories, Andrea - What does a 10 year old today ...... busy with the networks, computer games and F.B. ? - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Sounds like a great childhood. Times were simpler then but I think better.
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 1:06 PM
warming my heart; this splendid read took me back to the real good 'ole days, andie.. huggs
Adams Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 12:44 PM
it's so sad that children today do not experience half the fun we did as children! You brought me back some fond memories...enjoyed the read...hugs
Turner Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 9:46 AM
Andrea, a very intimate glimpse of your youth. I really love these poems, looking into people most treasured memories. You start to feel like your getting to know someone, and they're all similar, but unique. Thank you for sharing yours.
Daniel Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 9:30 AM
An excellent write...I can visualise it entirely.
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