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In Another Time

Way back then when I was ten, those were happy days: Staying out till it got dark; kickball was the craze! Taking walks or riding bikes, how we loved to go into town, buy some snacks or see a picture show. Late at night in the bedroom, we’d be whispering. Dad yelled, “Girls, get to sleep!” but we kept giggling. Shouts of joy when school was out! We could all foresee three months spread with sun and fun - our short destiny! Spraying one another with hoses felt so cool. Or we’d spend allowance on Weed Park Swimming Pool. Baseball, fairs, church camp, and picnics where we’d meet cousins, aunts and uncles - Such times were a treat. Family vacation meant in OUR car were ten! Not too comfortable, yet I’d do it all again! In September, back to school we all had to go. Halloween, which I loved, was ‘round the corner though. Then at last, Christmas parties! Also I was fond Of sledding over snow or skating on the pond. But my fondest memory was with family simply eating popcorn with Sunday night TV. For Caren Krutsinger's 'Pure Childlike Fun and Enthusiasm' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/18/2016 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this trip back to what sounds like my childhood at 10. Well done. I enjoyed.
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:54:00 AM
Hi Andrea: Great win! It's interesting to acknowledge what fun we created no matter what generation we lived in.
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:20:00 AM
Andrea, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:31:00 AM
happy snippets of childhood, andie.. big congrats!..huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:34:00 AM
Great write and a winner, Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:41:00 AM
Love your trip through the year, Andrea, and finishing off in such a loving way. Congrats! Viv x
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:31:00 PM
Back to say congratulations and thanks for letting us into your life:) Peace
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:05:00 PM
I liked how you wrote about different joys from throughout the year when you were ten. Kickball and skating were crazes during my childhood too... Congrats on a win with this beautiful poem! Thanks for entering, Andrea :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:54:00 PM
I've done most of those things except for skating on the pond! What a wonderful childhood you must have had. Now you got me feeling all nostalgic and stuff ...
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Date: 2/4/2016 8:19:00 AM
You've captured innocence here, and laid it out so elegantly. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2016 6:42:00 PM
A good life you had. Your disposition is quite good also. May I complement you on that? We make the best of it, do we not? The way we look back is a huge reflection on who we are now.
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Date: 2/1/2016 5:06:00 PM
Yes Andrea, those were the good old days for sure. You brought them to memory and made it so easy to read. Very nice, my friend.... Robert.
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Date: 2/1/2016 12:29:00 PM
You have very rich memories here displayed Andrea, I really like this indeed.'
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:09:00 PM
Sounds like the "good ole" times Andrea. Enjoyed the read today.-- Chas
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:37:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... really enjoyed reading your memory lane when ten and crikey, there is so much I can relate to - Lindsay
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:05:00 AM
I love all those memories too. Not the popcorn one though, it was agony with not wanting it and everyone around me making mouth noises eating it.
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:32:00 AM
How! I forgot to mention what you mentioned in stanza 3..Great poem. Good luck.
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Date: 1/30/2016 4:48:00 PM
I'm very happy to drop by MA. Thank you for sharing your memories of youth days. Stay blessed.........A.M.
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:17:00 PM
- Good loving memories, Andrea - What does a 10 year old today ...... busy with the networks, computer games and F.B. ? - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:25:00 PM
Sounds like a great childhood. Times were simpler then but I think better.
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:06:00 PM
warming my heart; this splendid read took me back to the real good 'ole days, andie.. huggs
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Date: 1/30/2016 12:44:00 PM
it's so sad that children today do not experience half the fun we did as children! You brought me back some fond memories...enjoyed the read...hugs
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Date: 1/30/2016 9:46:00 AM
Andrea, a very intimate glimpse of your youth. I really love these poems, looking into people most treasured memories. You start to feel like your getting to know someone, and they're all similar, but unique. Thank you for sharing yours.
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Date: 1/30/2016 9:30:00 AM
An excellent write...I can visualise it entirely.
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