In a Field Long Forgotten

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Concealed in a spring 
of honey dye on alder field, 
clipped wings and feet coupled, 
a broken appendage,
never to exhibit its grace 
and charm that once was envied.
Forgotten as the seasons pass 
it slowly shed its beauty,
imposed by red, orange, brown rust.
Roots, tendrils, leaves; 
nests obliged nature’s creatures, 
embedded in its coil, 
worn down its cracked and stain,
leather seats.
Emerald velvet moss 
concealing its frame, 
lulled by pleasing harmonies.
Garment bent in the undergrowth.
Orchard grass and wearing morning 
equally lay roads to diverge 
a wooded field hidden, 
away from travelers 
and unruly sun 
that never stops.
Wind runs free through windows, 
mocking,  nature's changing course.  
Seasons run evanescent, 
untrimmed that it's meant to stay
concealed in a spring of honey dye 
on alder field long forgotten. 


4/27/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/1/2019 12:58:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Eve.
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Date: 1/1/2019 12:36:00 PM
Eve, wowser here, you get better all the time and that's starting with an already high bar, congrats on this excellent write.
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Date: 12/31/2018 12:14:00 PM
Phenomenal write, Eve!:-) Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:31:00 PM
Edward, thank you so very much fro the congratulations my friend. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 12/30/2018 8:22:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Eve. Janice
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the congratulations, Janice. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 12/30/2018 3:26:00 PM
Eve, congrats on your win on mile 6 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. Awesome write! Interestingly, when I read this I pictured a plane shot down during WWII and left in a field to be enveloped by nature. But the cars work too :) Cheers! ~Mark
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:36:00 PM
Mark, thank you so very much. I ran across this picture and it inspired me. Relics like this remind us of the past and what we have accomplished. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 7/15/2018 8:19:00 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Love the imagery!
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your top place, Eve, with this evocative piece. // Barry
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Date: 7/15/2018 3:27:00 AM
Beautiful work, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 7/14/2018 4:24:00 PM
Great imagery, so glad I read it. Congrats on your win for this one!
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:45:00 AM
Gorgeous, Eve! Congrats on top honors.
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:41:00 AM
Congrats Eve on a wonderful win!
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Date: 5/7/2018 10:45:00 PM
A great poem Eve. All of mans achievements are nothing compared to nature. Well written Oliver
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Date: 5/1/2018 1:14:00 PM
Such a lovely piece on a forgotten, neglected treasure out worn its use except within our minds. Congrats on your placement, Eve. A truly unique piece well-written.
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Date: 4/28/2018 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! An awesome written painting of words. Excellent.
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:47:00 PM
Susan, thank you so very much. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/28/2018 1:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem, Eve.
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:47:00 PM
Line, thank you so very much for your congratulations. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/28/2018 12:54:00 PM
Oh lovely Eve, you are outstanding. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful gift. this is such a great poem. thank you and congratulations on your placement. ;)-luloo
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:46:00 PM
Laura, thank you so very much. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/28/2018 12:36:00 PM
Wonderful description ... Read several times ...
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:46:00 PM
Probir,thank you so very much. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/27/2018 12:09:00 PM
Excellent writing, Eve. In some ways this is reminiscent of Carl Sandburg's short poem "Grass." Those artifacts of yesteryear sit in landfills, denied the glory they once enjoyed. Love this one and it's a favorite for me. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:44:00 PM
Carolyn,thank you so very much. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 4/27/2018 4:46:00 AM
- Beautifully written Eve, many memories covered with moss - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/31/2018 4:44:00 PM
Sunshine, thank you so very much. May you have a happy new year with lots of blessings. Hugs Eve ~`*
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