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Imprint Lives In Ice

Slowly one rain drop Slips from the green leaf onto Creek's shallow blue pool Motion circles leave Their imprint on the surface Forever lives in ice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 3:17:00 PM
Nice Choka Sara, lovely images flowing through this piece>>James
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Date: 9/18/2009 12:06:00 AM
Very visual and imagist Sara.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/17/2009 4:28:00 PM
The Clear Rain Drop... The Green Leaf... The Blue Water... and The Ever Widening Circles... Oh, just Lovely... Sara... Just Lovely... Oh, by the way... Sara... I'm placing a poem for you... (I think I may have something you'll like...) MoonBee
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Date: 9/17/2009 4:08:00 PM
intersting..have you seen the newish research on the properties of water and how it's structure is changed by the words spoken around it or even printed on paper and taped to a jar of it? Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2009 2:54:00 PM
nicely done, you have a poem in your honor
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