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Immortality

I am immortal Though its hard to say Exactly how I got this way Not my choosing Though was trapped By a bunch of dirty rats Eternity of consciousness Is my fate Even when I pass away There is more still A landscaping of thrill Again, all against my will 8-September-2021

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Date: 11/19/2021 11:26:00 AM
This is a fabulous poem!! love it!
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Date: 11/19/2021 8:58:00 AM
Congrats Robert. .'..hard to say about immortality... May be destined Have a good day . .
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Date: 11/18/2021 8:10:00 PM
Interesting write, Robert. If i had to be immortal I'd want to have my youth, but be in peace and comfortable , no turmoil.
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Date: 9/15/2021 5:46:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 9/10/2021 10:39:00 PM
This is a Beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:32:00 PM
Thanks!

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