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In the dark of night, the celestial beauty of the universe comes into its own, illuminating the firmament. Galaxies, still in the throes of the big bang, swirl within infinite pools of ebony. And shooting stars, sojourn travelers to Earth, weave visual threads into the fabric of time and space. Chamaeleon clouds bleeding red at the horizon's cutting-edge hang low so as not to besmirch the grandeur of night. And Venus, like the mythical Goddess of beauty, outshines the stars, rising between Mercury and Earth, She lingers in regal repose, spinning, caught within gravity's invisible currents. A colony of bats spirals into the air like a phoenix rising from the ashes of a spent sun. And a chill runs down my spine as I stand in awe, in the presence of God's immaculate creation.

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Date: 7/6/2018 1:48:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your top win in Laura's contest with this beautiful write, well done !
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Date: 7/6/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/3/2018 6:21:00 AM
what a great usage of all 8 words dear Emile! This astounded me from beginning to end, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/3/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thank you Laura, I appreciate your visits my friend, you honor me, Emile.
Date: 6/9/2018 10:20:00 PM
Back with congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/10/2018 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2018 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 6/5/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2018 7:34:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Emile , with great inspirational imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2018 7:25:00 AM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2018 11:00:00 AM
Another top win Emile, you definitely know what I like and always end up at the top!
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Date: 6/4/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/31/2018 2:20:00 PM
Well done, Emile.
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Date: 6/1/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2018 1:27:00 PM
Indeed it is Emile, I often Venture out on a dark night and gaze up at that ' immaculate conception' Brilliant write. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 5/21/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Tom, your words brought a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.

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