Imagine

Travel on moonbeams to a star Just imagine and you'll be there Sail the ocean to places far Travel on moonbeams to a star With your mind you can set the bar and it can take you anywhere Travel on moonbeams to a star Just imagine and you'll be there

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/30/2023 1:06:00 AM

Nice uplift and well-written Triolet, my friend. I enjoyed the read. Have a great week! Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2023 5:51:00 PM

And THAT is how to do a theme like imagine. Big congrats

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/22/2023 4:23:00 PM

a delightful and uplifting poem, Joseph. We poets need to metaphorically travel on moonbeams to a star....that's where creativity and one's muse dwells. I'm faving this one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2023 9:57:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Joseph :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 4:07:00 AM

Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 10/18/2023 10:43:00 AM

Joseph, delightful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, well done, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/18/2023 9:07:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I really enjoyed reading your creative/fun "Imagine" write again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.......................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/17/2023 10:23:00 PM

Beauty, Joseph, in your sweet triolet:)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/17/2023 7:45:00 PM

In dreams, anything is possible. Thoughts allow the imagination to travel anywhere, and that's poetry in motion. This is beautiful in every way, Joseph. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/16/2023 4:28:00 PM

Sweet!