I'M Sorry, But You'Re Far Too Attractive

Look
The clouds move for you
My raincloud heavy summer
You don't even notice
It is sly
You are a coward

This has to be a finale
Tomorrow...maybe the day after
Then we can call this off
And I'll call you pedantic
Pathetic
Significant other, I lack my significance

This world is revolving for you
For me it stays stillborn-heavy and fixed like a pin
I notice they look in a wanderlust flame
Pretending a shoe or a coat steals their senses
Or you, it could be you
Each window should make a Kristallnacht for me
Anything at all to let that guard slip
That split on my hip is scarred
We were semi-automatic and colliding clockwork
I had you removed

This has to be the edge
I could push you off or you could jump tomorrow
A year or two but not a day past seventy

I'm sorry, but you're far too attractive
My delicate ego is a flower, like a summer long it wilts
Call me indifferent and I'll call you a dead-bed
I'll call you perfection if it means you call it off


And never leave me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Burton Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 6:12 PM
POWERFUL.... yet it speaks in a way that makes one think.... God gave the earth to man... in genesis, not the exact words... this is beautiful. Enjoy your night.
Richards Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 11:46 AM
Absolutely love this! a delicate ego like a flower.....aren't we all like this...? Haven't we all felt just like this...yes I think so! ~
Guzzi Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 5:22 AM
Thanks so much for your blog entry. So, you think it's only a human distortion of doctrine which causes organized religions to seek to convert or kill others not of the same faith? Please answer in blog....The verse above goes to my fav's! It sounds so like how I've felt and wish to feel again but 1) I'm old and 2) I not as erudite a writter as you. ;)
Brown Avatar
August 5, 2009 at 4:18 AM
Good morning Nathaniel. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Thank you. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 7:44 PM
line by line perfection! Nathaniel!! jimbo
Ryusaka Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 7:40 PM
<3 <3 <3 I love it... this is beautiful Nathaniel... you're only getting better. Your words and phrasing are.... uuuuurgh soul destroying lol. KCOG <3 Daffy
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