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I’m Pulled into the Dream

“And the proud dreaming king who flung the crown And sorrow away, and calling bard and clown” —W. B. Yeats (The Secret Rose) Yeats rambles on; and I say rambles; I can’t make heads nor tails of much; But imagery invites me to lie down On a Celtic blanket, close my eyes And listen For the lips to alliterate, make love. “And the proud dreaming king…” My ears navigate the waters…he’s proud; He’s dreaming; he’s king. I float On my back; danger’s near, I might sink; How so? I lose my bearing…proud… Dreaming…king. I’m lost in the middle; It is my beginning. I lose my mind: “…who flung the crown” I’m pulled Into the dream…the jewels of the whirlpool; Big glowing diamonds, rubies and gold; Only the rich long to drown in such. Cease; Be silent, until I prepare myself for more. I tender my glass of red, Watch it sparkle, Circle, Slide into the sea, Then I slowly sip, Sip, sip…Yeats moves his lips…He commands; He’s the conductor. He reads the last line One more time, for effect. I sigh, Lean in for more. The blanket of His arm around my shoulders. “…who flung the crown and sorrow away” I could meditate on this all the long day. …and calling bard And clown. The mind goes wild like a frenzied crowd.

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Date: 6/28/2024 6:38:00 AM
I am following your train of thoughts where you show me the intricacies of LIFE----Awesome!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/28/2024 8:42:00 AM
Glad you liked this!! Thank you, Patti!
Date: 6/26/2024 9:48:00 PM
I love it! I don't feel so all alone if you can say, "I don't know!" But poetry, whether ever nuance is understood or not, pulls an emotional AND physical reaction from us! I loved reading how it affected you. Zowee! Yes...zowee,I said it. Lol xo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 5:50:00 AM
You’ve said it! It pulls an emotional and physical reaction from us. Zowee…wowee! Thank you, Crystol! xo
Date: 6/26/2024 6:37:00 PM
Love this 'pillow talk,' Kim. Yeats 'meets' and even exceeds late-night expectations. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/27/2024 5:51:00 AM
“Pillow talk,” yes…lol
Date: 6/26/2024 12:48:00 PM
If I do not understand something, I just leave it. I don't like to waste time with things like that. But you have to admit those are lovely lines! I like how you showed us your meditation style.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea! I do appreciate you, my friend!
Date: 6/26/2024 11:00:00 AM
Yup, I do get it. I've read of these poets. Many times I just don't know what they mean. I doesn't matter. I do see how they can be inspiring. Music does that alot for me. Whatever works for each of us. Have A great Day
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:42:00 PM
Thanks R.J.! I guess it takes time with more informartion. Still these were cool lines!
Date: 6/26/2024 10:39:00 AM
“And the proud dreaming king who flung the crown And sorrow away, and calling bard and clown” -- He settled for simple existence over the burdens of power -- he settled for beauty and joy in place of fame. My take anyway. "I tender my glass of red, Watch it sparkle, Circle, Slide into the sea, Then I slowly sip, Sip, sip…Yeats moves his lips…He commands;" I agree, same conclusion. Great writing! Yeats is considered a great poet not for frivolous reasons -- you are in the best of company.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:43:00 PM
Thanks, Joe! Good to know! I appreciate you!
Date: 6/26/2024 9:51:00 AM
Kim, this is so uniquely haunting as you interact with Yeats through his words! This poem has so many layers "I could meditate on this all the long day!" There is a dreamy reality in every line and an overall mystical quality. I agree with Daniel, it is a sensory gem. If this is for a contest, best wishes for a win. It is poetic artistry. Blessings to you and a hug!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:46:00 PM
Hugs and blessings! Thanks so much for your support and encouragement!
Date: 6/26/2024 8:19:00 AM
Dear Kim, I found three wonderful things about your poem. First, it is so filled with evocative scenes that it shines through in your words. 2ndly, I really loved the interplay with Yeats, and it brings a fresh perspective and personal touch to his classic lines. 3rdly, the Sensory experience, which is probably my favorite part of the poem. You have it all there: visuals, auditories, touch, taste, and hearing. Yes, we can surrender our emotions to a dream-like state. Loved Every Word! – Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:48:00 PM
Daniel, how wonderful it is to have you on Poetry Soup! I appreciate and look forward to your critiques! Blessings and hugs!
Date: 6/26/2024 5:53:00 AM
lovely piece of writing, my friend - Yeats would enjoy it too, I'm sure
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2024 3:51:00 PM
Nice of you to say :) Thanks, Jack!
Date: 6/25/2024 7:08:00 PM
waw, Kim, great poetry, will meditate too all day, enjoyed yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 8:14:00 PM
Thank you, Yann! ahhh…
Date: 6/25/2024 7:04:00 PM
Geesh, I could almost hear you fling the crown and sorrow away, and bounce into this piece of poetry! Gorgeous writing, it reminds me of brainstorming- loved reading it
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2024 8:14:00 PM
Thanks so much! Yes, I like to just see where a poem goes with a few tweaks perhaps. :) Hugs

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