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The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale

I’m Packing and She’s Packing I’m a film noir private eye and I’ve got my eye on this voluptuous dame. I’m investigating the murder of her rich husband and searching for clues. Because deep in my gut, her sweet demeanor made me suspicious and I smelled a rat no matter how much charm she exuded. My research told me she used to be a barmaid in a well heeled club and her gentlemen friends (they weren’t gentlemen) sought her out and she could pick and choose. During my questioning , her sorrow consisted of martini in one hand and a cigarette in the other. I questioned her candidly and she answered as well in a sultry way. I was tempted but I had to be hard and in control of my misguided hormones. but I was determined seek the truth. she swayed me But I was on to her time will tell The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale Halibun Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh April 25, 2019

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Date: 5/24/2019 5:15:00 PM
Loved this. I can tell you're a true film noir fan, Ralph:-) I am, too! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/26/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, Edward. I'm a great fan of Film Noir. please read my poem, Film Noir when you have a chance.
Date: 5/1/2019 6:00:00 PM
Oohoohoo! Heavens to Sam Spade! I like it. It reads well and should be a winner. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB PS My maiden name was Vengi
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:26:00 PM
Love film noir. Just saw an interesting one on Turner last night. Have a good day.
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