The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale

I’m  Packing and She’s Packing 

I’m a film noir private eye and I’ve got my eye on this voluptuous dame. I’m investigating the murder of her rich husband and searching for clues. Because deep in my gut, her sweet demeanor made me suspicious and I smelled a rat no matter how much charm she exuded.

My research told me she used to be a barmaid in a well heeled club and her gentlemen friends (they weren’t  gentlemen) sought her out and she could pick and choose. During my questioning , her sorrow consisted of martini in one hand and a cigarette in the other.
I questioned her candidly and she answered as well in a sultry way. I was tempted but I had to be hard and in control of my misguided hormones. but I was determined seek the truth.

she swayed me
But I was on to her
time will tell

The Private Eye and the Femme Fatale
Halibun Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
April 25, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ibeh Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Loved this. I can tell you're a true film noir fan, Ralph:-) I am, too! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Sergi Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:26 AM
Thank you for the placement, Edward. I'm a great fan of Film Noir. please read my poem, Film Noir when you have a chance.
Ball Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 6:00 PM
Oohoohoo! Heavens to Sam Spade! I like it. It reads well and should be a winner. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB PS My maiden name was Vengi
Mchattie Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 9:26 PM
Love film noir. Just saw an interesting one on Turner last night. Have a good day.
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