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I'm Just Getting Started

why do you see me as broken-hearted? look out world... ~I’m just getting started~ for there is no mount high enough for me, an open field wide enough for me to spread my sowing seeds of redemption- they think I’m caged when I’ve been freed, see me as small when my heart encompasses all the world’s emotions (overwhelmingly beautiful…) a thirst quenched a famine nourished a photo framed a rose flourished I’m immune to dependency; saturated in thoughts of liberation and fearing not fate- walking through the threshold of sovereignty, for it is my prerogative to be happy and hopeful… finally freedom from all that held me back flows, as LOVE for MYSELF grows; my life has been blessed since pain has departed- so look out world… ~I’m just getting started~ September 14, 2019 I'm Just Getting Started Poetry Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 9/24/2019 11:35:00 PM
Love this... Congratulations and Blessings to you
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:45:00 AM
thank you and blessings to you also!! :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 8:17:00 PM
Oh LuLoo, I just love that last verse so much. Congratulations for your podium.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:45:00 AM
aww thanks lovely Jeanne :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 7:26:00 PM
back to say congratulations my friend, i told you this one would land in the winner's circle :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:44:00 AM
thank you once again sweet lady m:)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 2:44:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Lu Loo.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:44:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 1:45:00 PM
This is such a compelling statement of affirmation. Within your grasp you clutch the very essence of what it means to believe in yourself. Congratulations.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:44:00 AM
thank you so much Mark, all I can do is try :) -luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 1:41:00 PM
You're a truer poet than I with works like this -- NICE ~ Aloha always William
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:44:00 AM
aloha to you too!! thank you :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 1:30:00 PM
Lu congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:43:00 AM
many thanks sweet lady :) -luloo
Date: 9/24/2019 11:44:00 AM
Wow Laura what an interesting style a mix of free verse and rhyme, simply beautiful writing. Congrats on another top win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:43:00 AM
thank you! I am honored, and love your contests ;) Be blessed dear John, thanks again :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2019 3:13:00 PM
I love the way you penned this one....i agree this will be in the winner's circle for sure...you are a talented poetess my friend :) hugs
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2019 6:42:00 AM
thank you sweet Sandy, you are too kind :)-luloo
Date: 9/14/2019 11:06:00 PM
Oh wow I love this Laura! Will be a top win me thinks!;)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/15/2019 11:03:00 AM
thank you lovely Brenda, you are the sweetest :)-luloo