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I'M In a Jam

I’m stuck in traffic
Crawling like a slimy slug
Why call it rush hour?

4th April 2015

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Etienne Lariviere

May 12, 2015 at 5:53 PM

Welcome to Paris! LOL nothing is a rush here!

Jan Allison

May 12, 2015 at 5:57 PM

I may visit one day to find out:-) Hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

April 8, 2015 at 4:44 AM

Nice one. I like the question at the end. So true.

Jan Allison

May 12, 2015 at 5:56 PM

Thanks so much Njeri so I have only just come across your lovely comment:-) Hugs Janxxx

Wilma Neels

April 6, 2015 at 1:51 PM

So true Jan ;) had to giggle at this one.. thanks for the laughs tonight!

Jan Allison

April 6, 2015 at 2:36 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Wilma:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

April 6, 2015 at 6:39 AM

I forgot to say...a very clever title!

Jan Allison

April 6, 2015 at 6:40 AM

LOL - you are too kind me friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

April 6, 2015 at 6:35 AM

...because every one feels an emotional rush when they finally move! An excellent questionku, a fav!

Jan Allison

April 6, 2015 at 6:38 AM

LOL - lovely answer! Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

April 5, 2015 at 9:22 AM

Ha ha, so true. Thanks for using my form. Try "stuck in traffic" moving like a slug" is anyone rushing" the form is 456 ending with a question.

Jan Allison

April 5, 2015 at 11:46 AM

Oh that is clever twisting the poem round:-) Hugs jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

April 5, 2015 at 3:39 AM

Good one.e too hate traffic jam. Enjoyed. Tfs

Jan Allison

April 5, 2015 at 6:34 AM

Thanks Ravi:-) Hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

April 5, 2015 at 3:30 AM

That is good question! Thank goodness I am out of the city, I wouldn't have the patience for that! Hugs my friend xxx

Jan Allison

April 5, 2015 at 6:34 AM

On our little Island 5 cars in front is a traffic jam lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Edward Ebbs

April 4, 2015 at 9:54 PM

LOL, why? Cute :)

Jan Allison

April 5, 2015 at 2:28 AM

Quite an ironic question lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

April 4, 2015 at 6:04 PM

another witty Q, jan... it won't be rush hour if peeps are not stuck..:).. real goood one!.. huggs

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 6:08 PM

Thanks Nette:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

April 4, 2015 at 6:02 PM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Aren't you glad that it is not all the time that happens..Thanks for stopping by..I finished the poem but changed the title to Dew..Sara

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 6:07 PM

We don't have traffic like the one in the picture in fact we dont have a motorway lol - will drop by and read 'dew':-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 4, 2015 at 5:19 PM

they are all rushing at once, which makes for no "Russian"!! you are always thinking up fun stuff, Jan. Soupmail.

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 5:53 PM

lol Andrea:-) I do appreciate your support my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

April 4, 2015 at 3:44 PM

Cute jan..slimy slugs...yuk...but fun.

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 5:52 PM

lol Janet ... now where is my salt pot :-( Hugs jan xx

Kim Shaw

April 4, 2015 at 3:28 PM

Hi Jan! This is brilliant. Love your questionku. Have a wonderful Easter! Hugs, Kim xx

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 5:51 PM

Thanks Kimberly:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

April 4, 2015 at 2:56 PM

This is one of the cutest questionku that I have read! No worry, I'll send you a helicopter;) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 5:51 PM

Pure fantasy on my part Paul - 5 cars in front of us is a traffic jam here lol:-) hugs jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

April 4, 2015 at 2:52 PM

That's what so many thought yesterday around here when the President used our local Interstate during "rush hour"; you couldn't even get on the Interstate. Good one, Jan.

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 5:50 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Reason:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

April 4, 2015 at 12:43 PM

Enough of the funny stuff, my ribs are not bullet proof woman ;-) love the thinking behind this Jan, double hugs before I double over, James xxx

Jan Allison

April 4, 2015 at 12:47 PM

I am going to have to give up writing if I can't use humour James!:-( :-( :-( this poem came about as a result of a conversation I was having with my sister:-) thanks for being such a wonderful supporter of my work my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

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