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ILLUSION Had he ever truly come close to me? Then why had he appeared in the morning? He did not speak but left casually. My ears were eager to listen something. Had he paid any precise attention? Had he appeared at evening just by chance? He had not lifted his eyes, but just gone! My eyes were too anxious to greet his glance. Had he ever reared little love for me? Then why had he dared to enter my room? Just to hold my hand he did not feel free. My tingling passion was about to bloom. An illusion? Had he come really? How could I endure? I loved him dearly. 10/27/15 First Place 'PREMIERE CONTEST NO. 170 BY Brian Strand Second Place 'I-Contest' New or Old by Constance La France

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Date: 9/15/2021 5:56:00 AM
Anisha, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 11/2/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Upma. Where do you stay? AnishaD
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:24:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Anisha!
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Date: 11/2/2015 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Upma Anisha D
Date: 11/1/2015 1:25:00 AM
Congrats Anisha in this sonnet questionku! Good luck! Balveen
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Anisha

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