Illusion

In the world of illusion Who am i Am i an entity In your invisible eye Do you exist To see me Or are we somewhere else Roaming free Illusionist act Disappear Am i far Am i near Can you see me now Was i ever there To gaze blind Stare

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Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 5/30/2009 4:56:00 PM

makes me question even more now than i did....great and wonderful

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/27/2009 10:41:00 AM

the nature of the exsistance of the sentient being LOL who knows are we a mote in the eye of God or is God a mote in the eye of man? Light & Love

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/27/2009 10:10:00 AM

love the thinkers. this is one to ponder for sure. a fellow philosopher I see. awesome. love, Kristin

Daver Austin

Date: 5/27/2009 6:51:00 AM

Into another dimension with this one. A real fine meditation or contemplation...Zenish. Love it! daver

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/26/2009 9:54:00 PM

This one makes you think. I like it...I like it a lot. Great job James. Thanks for the comments. I appreciate them. Nate

Constance La France

Date: 5/26/2009 6:21:00 PM

powerful and thought provoking...