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Illumination

ILLUMINATION 

a school-ager swings
PAST the emerald trees
to crystalline stars
she aims high
with outstretched legs
heart pounding

she jumps landing
soundly on sensible feet
in the PRESENT
wise with solid roots
climbs the tree of logic

bumbling into the FUTURE
a scholar’s taken a beating
the ultramarine sky calls
she covers herself in yarn
colorizing stars with needles

11/21/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/22/2016 5:54:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Christy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Christy!
Date: 11/22/2016 6:23:00 AM
Brilliant ... Nice ... GL ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!
Date: 11/22/2016 1:31:00 AM
Life is a continuum and the search for understand a constant. Lovely, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen!
Date: 11/21/2016 11:34:00 PM
Love the imagery, Kim, and that last line is an absolute belter. Viv x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Viv!
Date: 11/21/2016 11:11:00 PM
I love the way your mind works in this, very imaginative. A top write. Enjoyed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Rick!

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