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Illumination

ILLUMINATION a school-ager swings PAST the emerald trees to crystalline stars she aims high with outstretched legs heart pounding she jumps landing soundly on sensible feet in the PRESENT wise with solid roots climbs the tree of logic bumbling into the FUTURE a scholar’s taken a beating the ultramarine sky calls she covers herself in yarn colorizing stars with needles 11/21/2016

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Date: 11/22/2016 5:54:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Christy!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Christy!
Date: 11/22/2016 6:23:00 AM
Brilliant ... Nice ... GL ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Probir!
Date: 11/22/2016 1:31:00 AM
Life is a continuum and the search for understand a constant. Lovely, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen!
Date: 11/21/2016 11:34:00 PM
Love the imagery, Kim, and that last line is an absolute belter. Viv x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Viv!
Date: 11/21/2016 11:11:00 PM
I love the way your mind works in this, very imaginative. A top write. Enjoyed.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2016 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Rick!

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