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I'LL NEVER GIVE UP

I miss you my love For we are apart Far across the seas I pray will we meet Sweep me off my feet Lonely days pass Sad tears now flow I need some news Ease my sorrow My true love Hear my plea Come to me I won’t Give up Hope 01~06~14 Contest: Dr Ram Mehta – Diminished Hexaverse Syllable Counter Used - How Many Syllables ~awarded 8th place~

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Date: 1/23/2015 11:43:00 AM
Jan, fabulous write and win, I like your Hope.. sweet congrats!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/23/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Dave:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 1/23/2015 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful, Jan...I would place this hopeful write much higher...hugs, Rhonda
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
LOL...I think the HM is worse!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/23/2015 10:41:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda your comment means the world to me - Armand felt the same too - but at least it wasn't an HM or the dreaded N/A lol Hugs Jan x
Date: 1/22/2015 12:15:00 AM
I will not give up too , congrats on the win Jan..huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/22/2015 2:00:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2015 4:21:00 PM
!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2015 11:18:00 AM
Congratulations Jan> love-rajat
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 11:28:00 AM
Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/20/2015 7:56:00 AM
I would of loved to see this oh so special write, higher up on the list. Still happy to congratulate you on your win.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 10:20:00 AM
Me too Armand lol :-) least it wasn't an HM or N/A lol:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 1/19/2015 10:40:00 PM
Never shud one give up hope, so true is ur write Jan! Congrats on fine win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 1:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma I will never give up on him I love him so much as a dear dear friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2015 7:38:00 PM
This is fine work for the contest. The title is very strong too. Congrats!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 1:08:00 AM
Thanks David I think the title is as important as the actual poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2015 6:42:00 PM
Your imagery here describes hope to a T, Jan. Congratulations on your win. There is no giving up in hope.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 1:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2015 5:31:00 PM
Hi Jan, stopping back to congratulate you on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/20/2015 1:07:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2015 3:45:00 PM
He will come back do not give up hope - congrats Ron
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/19/2015 3:47:00 PM
I hope and pray we are in contact again soon Ronald - I miss him oh so much:-(
Date: 1/19/2015 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/19/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thanks for sponsoring the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/19/2015 10:33:00 AM
Someday you'll meet again. Keep that hope alive my friend. Congratulations on your win.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/19/2015 12:00:00 PM
I just hope we have contact again Brenda - I would love to meet but doubt we ever will:-)hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/12/2015 9:42:00 PM
Again touching! Wish you soon meet your lover, and he gives you plenty of love..
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/13/2015 1:06:00 AM
It's actually written based on an amazing friendship not a love affair although I love his so much as a wonderful friend - so there is a little poetic licence here:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/9/2015 9:45:00 AM
I know who this is for and that makes it even more special. Hope you hear a word soon, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/9/2015 10:10:00 AM
I miss Darren's friendship and support more and more each day I hope and pray i will hear again soon:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/7/2015 1:35:00 PM
This rings with a hopeful tone.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/7/2015 1:38:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard it is written from the heart I miss Darren's friendship so much:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/7/2015 1:10:00 PM
Hi Jan, A lovely poem. Sad but still with hope. i know what it is to "not know". I think this is a winner in the competition. love Shane xxx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/7/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Shane my lovely friend - its the not knowing that hurts so badly:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/7/2015 10:41:00 AM
Hi Jan...I still have to try out this interesting form; you make it look so easy. Understandable content...true friends can never be discarded and we feel for them and their absence. gl and hugs. // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/7/2015 1:37:00 PM
Its written from the heart Paul I miss Darren's friendship oh so much:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/7/2015 10:21:00 AM
Beautiful, sweetie. All we can do is live with hope...what else is there? Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/7/2015 10:32:00 AM
ooh love the sultry avatar my friend - I have hope Eileen its all I have left in this situation:-( Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/6/2015 6:05:00 PM
extremely well done for a difficult write. Proud of you my dear Hugs Edith
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/7/2015 10:31:00 AM
Behave! Hugs jan xx
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Mama Bear
Date: 1/6/2015 6:55:00 PM
I have a feeling that you do not ever need a white flag. LOL Hugs Edith
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 6:11:00 PM
Aww mama bear you are always so kind my friend but I will never wave the white flag on this one he is simly a dear dear friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/6/2015 5:19:00 PM
Excellent! Feels as if it was painful to write. I swear I can see a tear on my screen. Lots of Love, Armand.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Armand am in a good place at the moment but I have to go where my muse takes me - wish I could control it lol:-) Hugs as ever my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Hi Jan, such a deep sense of hope you convey in your poem with such perfect flow of words! Good luck in the contest...I see it a winner! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 4:55:00 PM
Thanks Sandra maybe we can share the same step for this one - and not the naughty step! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 1/6/2015 4:47:00 PM
Very nice! There is lots of Hope in the air tonight! Hugs and Hope! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 4:52:00 PM
Yes amazing Cas - hope its not just wishful thinking! Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/6/2015 4:37:00 PM
Beautiful tender poetry Jan encompassing hope with a wanting conviction. Good luck in the contest - James :) xx :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thanks James its written from the heart:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 1/6/2015 4:26:00 PM
Never give up Jan....There is always a glimmer of hope..my best to you and your family...hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/6/2015 4:27:00 PM
Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan x
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