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I'Ll Never Give Up

I miss you my love For we are apart Far across the seas I pray will we meet Sweep me off my feet Lonely days pass Sad tears now flow I need some news Ease my sorrow My true love Hear my plea Come to me I won’t Give up Hope 01~06~14 Contest: Dr Ram Mehta – Diminished Hexaverse Syllable Counter Used - How Many Syllables ~awarded 8th place~

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/23/2015 10:09:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan...I would place this hopeful write much higher...hugs, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/23/2015 12:12:00 PM

LOL...I think the HM is worse!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/23/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Rhonda your comment means the world to me - Armand felt the same too - but at least it wasn't an HM or the dreaded N/A lol Hugs Jan x

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/22/2015 12:15:00 AM

I will not give up too , congrats on the win Jan..huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/22/2015 2:00:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2015 4:21:00 PM

!!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/20/2015 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations Jan> love-rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 11:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/20/2015 7:56:00 AM

I would of loved to see this oh so special write, higher up on the list. Still happy to congratulate you on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 10:20:00 AM

Me too Armand lol :-) least it wasn't an HM or N/A lol:-) Hugs Jan x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/19/2015 10:40:00 PM

Never shud one give up hope, so true is ur write Jan! Congrats on fine win!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 1:09:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma I will never give up on him I love him so much as a dear dear friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 1/19/2015 7:38:00 PM

This is fine work for the contest. The title is very strong too. Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 1:08:00 AM

Thanks David I think the title is as important as the actual poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/19/2015 6:42:00 PM

Your imagery here describes hope to a T, Jan. Congratulations on your win. There is no giving up in hope.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Reason:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/19/2015 5:31:00 PM

Hi Jan, stopping back to congratulate you on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/19/2015 11:17:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2015 12:01:00 PM

Thanks for sponsoring the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 1/19/2015 10:33:00 AM

Someday you'll meet again. Keep that hope alive my friend. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/19/2015 12:00:00 PM

I just hope we have contact again Brenda - I would love to meet but doubt we ever will:-)hugs Jan xx

Fayaz Bhat

Date: 1/12/2015 9:42:00 PM

Again touching! Wish you soon meet your lover, and he gives you plenty of love..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2015 1:06:00 AM

It's actually written based on an amazing friendship not a love affair although I love his so much as a wonderful friend - so there is a little poetic licence here:-) Hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/7/2015 1:35:00 PM

This rings with a hopeful tone.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Richard it is written from the heart I miss Darren's friendship so much:-( Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/7/2015 1:10:00 PM

Hi Jan, A lovely poem. Sad but still with hope. i know what it is to "not know". I think this is a winner in the competition. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2015 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Shane my lovely friend - its the not knowing that hurts so badly:-( Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/7/2015 10:41:00 AM

Hi Jan...I still have to try out this interesting form; you make it look so easy. Understandable content...true friends can never be discarded and we feel for them and their absence. gl and hugs. // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2015 1:37:00 PM

Its written from the heart Paul I miss Darren's friendship oh so much:-( Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/7/2015 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful, sweetie. All we can do is live with hope...what else is there? Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2015 10:32:00 AM

ooh love the sultry avatar my friend - I have hope Eileen its all I have left in this situation:-( Hugs jan xx

Mama Bear

Date: 1/6/2015 6:05:00 PM

extremely well done for a difficult write. Proud of you my dear Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 1/7/2015 10:31:00 AM

Behave! Hugs jan xx

Mama Bear
Date: 1/6/2015 6:55:00 PM

I have a feeling that you do not ever need a white flag. LOL Hugs Edith

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 6:11:00 PM

Aww mama bear you are always so kind my friend but I will never wave the white flag on this one he is simly a dear dear friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/6/2015 5:19:00 PM

Excellent! Feels as if it was painful to write. I swear I can see a tear on my screen. Lots of Love, Armand.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 5:25:00 PM

Thanks Armand am in a good place at the moment but I have to go where my muse takes me - wish I could control it lol:-) Hugs as ever my friend:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/6/2015 4:52:00 PM

Hi Jan, such a deep sense of hope you convey in your poem with such perfect flow of words! Good luck in the contest...I see it a winner! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 1/6/2015 4:55:00 PM

Thanks Sandra maybe we can share the same step for this one - and not the naughty step! Hugs Jan xxx