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A song of inspiration to sing when feeling down!

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I'll be strong Vs 1 You're getting tired of losing... there's not enough joy and peace to be found Sometimes it's better choosing... to set your goals high, never looking down (refrain) Let's be strong together! Make changes together! Let's be strong together! Have the courage to say: Chorus I'll be strong... I'll forget all the pain, I'll be strong... I'll learn from my mistakes, I'll be strong... I'll be who I am and not be ashamed Vs 2 Your will to live is fading... don't give up on the chance to live your dreams... maybe time to do some praying... for courage to be strong and to believe (refrain) Let's be strong together! Make changes together! Let's be strong together! Have the courage to say: Chorus I'll be strong... I'll forget all the pain, I'll be strong... I'll learn from my mistakes, I'll be strong... I'll be who I am and not be ashamed repeat chorus and fade Revised with music and vocals July 26,2025 John Derek Hamilton

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2025 8:27:00 PM

This is wonderful, John. The message so inspirational and the music so fitting. Love your talent.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/27/2025 5:06:00 PM

Hello John, As a singer-songwriter myself, I felt a kinship with your writing, and I am very appreciative of your words, poems, and songs, for they feel real and alive. Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed it tremendously. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Daniel I'm pleased to meet you glad you liked this one enough to comment. I always appreciate the feedback from songwriters especially as it's really a different genre from poetry, songwriting comes easy poetry I learned on this site.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/27/2025 4:10:00 PM

I'm visiting this poem/song again my dear friend. One, to listen and feel the emotions within, and two; to say congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you, John. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Fleming

Date: 7/27/2025 1:29:00 PM

Congrats, John. Stirring stuff! :) john

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 3:22:00 PM

Thanks John nice to see you today thanks for your kind words.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/27/2025 12:18:00 PM

I really felt your passion and love for your song, it feels good! A feel good song that soars above wide open prairies and theme Greatest American Hero's intro came to mind Congratulations John on an inspirational POTD! xhugs_Anaya

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/27/2025 1:13:00 PM

John your "Welcome to a brand new world" has inspired me to write today and I'm about to post it! :)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Anaya

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/27/2025 11:16:00 AM

A nice repeat of positivity and encouragement! Congrats on POTD!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2025 10:46:00 AM

- A lovely song with deep emotion, John :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/27/2025 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations for your well deserved POTD John. Enjoy :)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Heidi

Mark Toney

Date: 7/27/2025 9:38:00 AM

John, your song is not only inspirational but is also unifying. “Let’s be strong together! Make changes together!” A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Mark nice to see you pass by my way, glad you liked it enough to fave it, take care JD

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/27/2025 8:52:00 AM

Dear John, I felt immersed in this musical experience. I was embraced by your inspiring lyrics, vocals that swelled magnificently as the song progresses, a very catchy refrain and the beautiful orchestration pulsating with melodic determination to enhance your uplifting message. This song thrills my mind, thrums my heart and strums my soul! I love it! This musical masterwork is a fav for me! Congratulations for POTD honors! A spectacular choice! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Sue so glad you enjoyed it that means a lot to me, especially the fave that is very special.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/27/2025 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win..........

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 9:46:00 AM

Hi Paula thanks for your kind words, did you hear the song?

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/27/2025 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD John! :)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Linda did you hear the song?

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/27/2025 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honor dear poet. Cheers!!!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 9:45:00 AM

Thanks very much, did you listen to the song?

Valsa George

Date: 7/27/2025 6:25:00 AM

Dear friend, you have put a lot of effort into it. Your labour is not wasted. Now reap the reward and enjoy the honor! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Valsa yes I was a little worried 20 views and no comments, but it was worth the wait. Thanks for your kind words and visit.

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/27/2025 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations John on possibly the most musical POTD I’ve seen here, you put a lot of graft into this piece, and delighted it paid off, cheers David

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:16:00 AM

Thanks David yeah it is a lot of work but worth it. Glad you enjoyed it enough to comment.

Tom Woody

Date: 7/27/2025 4:50:00 AM

Quite an uplifting song John. So glad it got POTD recognition for you. Enjoy the special day

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:15:00 AM

Thanks Tom glad you liked it.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/27/2025 4:49:00 AM

John, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:14:00 AM

Thanks Tania did you hear the song? It's embedded in the lyrics just push play.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/27/2025 4:03:00 AM

Dear John,I just wanted to take a moment to sincerely congratulate you both for your POTD and on this musical masterpiece. I know how hard it is to make a song and the way you've brought the music together is nothing short of remarkable—that uplifting beat with orchestral touches and a rock edge creates such a powerful emotional landscape. The soaring vocals, combined with an awesome message, truly give the song that crowd anthem energy. It builds and lifts in all the right places, making it not only moving but unforgettable. You’ve captured both vulnerability and strength in a way that inspires and connects deeply. Well done—this is a song that stays with you. Wishing you continued success and creativity...Hugs

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:13:00 AM

Wow great comment Maria, you described the impact I was hoping for. Thanks for your continued support.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 2:50:00 AM

lovely and inspirational lyrics. Congrats on your POTD designation!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Sara did you play the song too?

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/27/2025 2:49:00 AM

Really uplifting and heartfelt, John! The chorus sticks with you—strong message and great flow. Would love to hear it with vocals!Congrats on POTD John.

Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/27/2025 7:58:00 AM

@Tom Yes, I did. I’ve listened to it over and over—I just can’t get over it. The lyrics, the arrangement, and the vocals all blended perfectly with the melody. It really moved me

Tom Woody
Date: 7/27/2025 7:38:00 AM

Rowena you have to go to his page to play the audio

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:10:00 AM

The song is embedded just push play. Thanks for you kind visit and comment

Jan Allison

Date: 7/27/2025 2:07:00 AM

dropping back with many congrats on POTD John, hugs Jan x

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:08:00 AM

Thanks Jan it's been a while feels good.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/27/2025 1:24:00 AM

Marvellous, love the poem and the song. Congratulations on having received poem of the day… Beryl

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:07:00 AM

Thanks Beryl glad you liked it.

Karen Jones

Date: 7/27/2025 12:55:00 AM

Wonderful music and fantastic lyrics and melodic inspirational message! I agree a masterpiece! Love it! Did you sing it? Congratulations on an outstanding potd!

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:06:00 AM

No I sing but not that well. Thanks for your great feedback.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2025 7:46:00 PM

Wow! Simply brilliant, love the words and its strength when sung, great singing:)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2025 6:05:00 AM

Thanks Jo glad you like it

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2025 5:20:00 PM

wow a musical masterpiece, it's so great to see the poem and hear the song - excellent ink John, the song is so uplifting. :-) hugs jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2025 5:24:00 PM

Hi Jan thanks for your great comment and visit, glad you liked it.