John Hamilton Poet Lyric

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I'll be strong song version

I'll be strong

Vs 1
You're getting tired of losing...
there's not enough joy and peace to be found
Sometimes it's better choosing...
to set your goals high, never looking down


(refrain)
Let's be strong together!
Make changes together!
Let's be strong together!
Have the courage to say:


Chorus
I'll be strong...
I'll forget all the pain,
I'll be strong...
I'll learn from my mistakes,
I'll be strong...
I'll be who I am and not be ashamed


Vs 2
Your  will to live is fading...
don't give up on the chance to live your dreams...
maybe time to do some praying...
for courage to be strong and to believe


(refrain)
Let's be strong together!
Make changes together!
Let's be strong together!
Have the courage to say:


Chorus
I'll be strong...
I'll forget all the pain,
I'll be strong...
I'll learn from my mistakes,
I'll be strong...
I'll be who I am and not be ashamed

repeat chorus and fade

Revised with music and vocals
July 26,2025
John Derek Hamilton

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Line Gauthier August 2, 2025 at 4:41 PM Awesome quality of lyrics and vocals ~ amazing John Hamilton August 2, 2025 at 5:48 PM Thanks Line nice to see you pass by my page with your kind words of support.

sara Etgen-Baker July 29, 2025 at 5:15 PM I read your poem, John, then listened to you perform the song. Your voice and words are captivating and speak to a truth. Your song is inspirational, uplifting, and powerful. What a joy! Keep sharing your words and your voice, Sara John Hamilton July 29, 2025 at 6:09 PM Thanks Sara glad you enjoy my songs, they are professionally recorded, not me singing. Uplifting and inspirational are what I was hoping for.

Charlotte Puddifoot July 29, 2025 at 9:02 AM i enjoyed listening to this, it's really good, and i see it had potd, very fitting and an uplifting message...thx for visiting my page with a lovely comment :) John Hamilton July 29, 2025 at 11:54 AM Hi Charlotte, the pleasure is all mine. Thanks for stopping by, this is a simple tune but seems to resonate with a lot of people. I will be posting more songs almost daily so keep checking there are some really good ones coming! Take care JDH oh btw I took the best of Susan Ashleys Amberina Ballerina poem and turned it into a song, it's called untamed heart. I would love to do the same with one of yours, interested?

Bill Baker July 28, 2025 at 4:50 PM Beautiful Lyric poetry, John. The addition of the music and vocals was a joy to listen to. Thanks for sharing it with us! Congratulations on it being chosen as the POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill John Hamilton July 28, 2025 at 5:29 PM Thanks a lot Bill much appreciated

CayCay Godwin July 28, 2025 at 2:50 PM Took me to church so I gathered my cousin, husband and son that they might go to church also. That cat came on his own. All five of us were uplifted and faith filled-regenerated. That song fills one up with its high energy spiritually intoxicating message. I could listen to it daily and never get tired of hearing it. CayCay John Hamilton July 28, 2025 at 5:28 PM Thanks Cay Cay I'm so pleased you like it!

Sam Kauffman July 28, 2025 at 11:28 AM John, congrats and high fives for your inspirational POTD! So very happy for you and for your message of working together! So happy to see you back in the soup. Have missed you! Sending you blessings! Hope all is well. John Hamilton July 28, 2025 at 5:27 PM Thanks Sam it's good to be back refocussed and energized.

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2025 at 8:27 PM This is wonderful, John. The message so inspirational and the music so fitting. Love your talent. John Hamilton July 28, 2025 at 7:28 AM Thanks Andrea.

Daniel Henry Rodgers July 27, 2025 at 5:06 PM Hello John, As a singer-songwriter myself, I felt a kinship with your writing, and I am very appreciative of your words, poems, and songs, for they feel real and alive. Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed it tremendously. Summer Blessings, My Friend, Daniel John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:06 PM Thanks Daniel I'm pleased to meet you glad you liked this one enough to comment. I always appreciate the feedback from songwriters especially as it's really a different genre from poetry, songwriting comes easy poetry I learned on this site.

Brandy Nicole July 27, 2025 at 4:10 PM I'm visiting this poem/song again my dear friend. One, to listen and feel the emotions within, and two; to say congratulations on receiving Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you, John. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Fleming July 27, 2025 at 1:29 PM Congrats, John. Stirring stuff! :) john John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 3:22 PM Thanks John nice to see you today thanks for your kind words.

I Am Anaya July 27, 2025 at 12:18 PM I really felt your passion and love for your song, it feels good! A feel good song that soars above wide open prairies and theme Greatest American Hero's intro came to mind Congratulations John on an inspirational POTD! xhugs_Anaya I Am Anaya July 27, 2025 at 1:13 PM John your "Welcome to a brand new world" has inspired me to write today and I'm about to post it! :) John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM Thanks Anaya

Kim Rodrigues July 27, 2025 at 11:16 AM A nice repeat of positivity and encouragement! Congrats on POTD! John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM Thanks Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen July 27, 2025 at 10:46 AM - A lovely song with deep emotion, John :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 12:26 PM Thanks Anne-Lise

Heidi Sands July 27, 2025 at 10:28 AM Congratulations for your well deserved POTD John. Enjoy :) John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 12:25 PM Thanks Heidi

Mark Toney July 27, 2025 at 9:38 AM John, your song is not only inspirational but is also unifying. “Let’s be strong together! Make changes together!” A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on Poem of the Day! John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 9:49 AM Thanks Mark nice to see you pass by my way, glad you liked it enough to fave it, take care JD

Susan Ashley July 27, 2025 at 8:52 AM Dear John, I felt immersed in this musical experience. I was embraced by your inspiring lyrics, vocals that swelled magnificently as the song progresses, a very catchy refrain and the beautiful orchestration pulsating with melodic determination to enhance your uplifting message. This song thrills my mind, thrums my heart and strums my soul! I love it! This musical masterwork is a fav for me! Congratulations for POTD honors! A spectacular choice! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 9:48 AM Thanks Sue so glad you enjoyed it that means a lot to me, especially the fave that is very special.

Paula Goldsmith July 27, 2025 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day with your win.......... John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 9:46 AM Hi Paula thanks for your kind words, did you hear the song?

Linda Alice Fowler July 27, 2025 at 7:23 AM Congratulations on your POTD John! :) John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 9:46 AM Thanks Linda did you hear the song?

thriveni c mysore July 27, 2025 at 6:53 AM Congratulations on your POTD honor dear poet. Cheers!!! thriveni c mysore July 29, 2025 at 9:40 AM I did. mesmerizing! John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 9:45 AM Thanks very much, did you listen to the song?

Valsa George July 27, 2025 at 6:25 AM Dear friend, you have put a lot of effort into it. Your labour is not wasted. Now reap the reward and enjoy the honor! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:30 AM Thanks Valsa yes I was a little worried 20 views and no comments, but it was worth the wait. Thanks for your kind words and visit.

David Kavanagh July 27, 2025 at 5:26 AM Congratulations John on possibly the most musical POTD I’ve seen here, you put a lot of graft into this piece, and delighted it paid off, cheers David John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:16 AM Thanks David yeah it is a lot of work but worth it. Glad you enjoyed it enough to comment.

Tania Kitchin July 27, 2025 at 4:49 AM John, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD. John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:14 AM Thanks Tania did you hear the song? It's embedded in the lyrics just push play.

Maria Williams July 27, 2025 at 4:03 AM Dear John,I just wanted to take a moment to sincerely congratulate you both for your POTD and on this musical masterpiece. I know how hard it is to make a song and the way you've brought the music together is nothing short of remarkable—that uplifting beat with orchestral touches and a rock edge creates such a powerful emotional landscape. The soaring vocals, combined with an awesome message, truly give the song that crowd anthem energy. It builds and lifts in all the right places, making it not only moving but unforgettable. You’ve captured both vulnerability and strength in a way that inspires and connects deeply. Well done—this is a song that stays with you. Wishing you continued success and creativity...Hugs John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:13 AM Wow great comment Maria, you described the impact I was hoping for. Thanks for your continued support.

sara Etgen-Baker July 27, 2025 at 2:50 AM lovely and inspirational lyrics. Congrats on your POTD designation! John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:11 AM Thanks Sara did you play the song too?

Rowena Velasco July 27, 2025 at 2:49 AM Really uplifting and heartfelt, John! The chorus sticks with you—strong message and great flow. Would love to hear it with vocals!Congrats on POTD John. Rowena Velasco July 27, 2025 at 7:58 AM @Tom Yes, I did. I’ve listened to it over and over—I just can’t get over it. The lyrics, the arrangement, and the vocals all blended perfectly with the melody. It really moved me John Hamilton July 27, 2025 at 6:10 AM The song is embedded just push play. Thanks for you kind visit and comment

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