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If We Ever Meet

If we were to ever meet If these eyes were ever blessed If we ever get a chance a chance to walk through resplendent rose gardens gaze fondly upon tapestries in the presidential palaces I would not even see not even be able to notice their beauty their allure for all in my vision would be you your candied coloured caramelized eyes melting around my big red heart If we were to ever meet your smile would consume me stop me where I stood caress my soul and comfort me tell me I'm finally where I belong If we were to ever meet before our final setting sun my world would be a lot brighter because I know you are the one

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2015 2:30:00 PM

Such a beautiful read Tim, a delight that must be shared with a loved one, James :) :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 2:33:00 PM

It sure does James. Have a great week.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/14/2015 8:36:00 AM

Tim this my favorite from your writes. This is a winner my friend. The message, of her beauty overcoming everything that is beautiful is a very clever thought and theme. You put me there with you looking at a supreme lovely perfection. This deserves a 7 and is a winner. Applause my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 1:09:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend. I am happy you feel that way.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/14/2015 4:24:00 AM

You never cease to amaze me Tim.. You know how to set the mood of a moment in time. A favourite.

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 1:08:00 PM

I only write what flows from my heart. Thanks Charmu : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2015 3:50:00 AM

- A pleasure to read .... sweet and lovely, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 1:07:00 PM

Thank you A-L

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2015 11:20:00 PM

by the way if we do meet, we better fight over hockey teams, people hear us discussing poetry verse , and we both wont live long!!!! LOL cheers

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 1:04:00 PM

lol

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2015 11:19:00 PM

If we ever meet, it will be at a pub before a hockey game, fighting over the Hawks or the Habs!!!! and I dont even have to tell you another great romantic poem!

Tim Smith
Date: 9/14/2015 1:05:00 PM

When we challenge for the Cup we will do a home and home trip.