If She Needed - - -

(ON THE DAY OF HER FUNERAL) if she needed the light, i would have roped the sun- for she was my reverie of sight, (my only one) for words can never express my depth, metaphors can’t give ease to my pain- for she was the one who rescued me, and i am perpetually grateful; her slightly slanted chestnut eyes resonate within my inner core, still after nine years i can’t forget her ethereal laugh sunday morning coffee with her- sitting and believing in each other, remembering why we were so attached, and feeling the emotions only sisters have the capability to feel if she needed tears, i would have given an ocean- relieved all her fears, (shown genuine devotion) she’s the magic holding the stars up, though the sky she painted was never blue- it was yellow when she flew with eagles, the color of joy when sorrow prevailed; yes, she left without warning, tragedy called her name without answers, but she is the light that i would rope, and through her death i’ve learned to cope i stand up here and spread her love; sowing seeds that could never be blown across lavender fields and pine trees she traded places with an angel, and will be remembered until grains run out of the hourglass she fought so hard to build --- with arthritic hands that never gave up if she needed the sky, i’d give her the northern lights- bestowing peace as I cry, (seeing beautiful sights)
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“i love you and miss you- sleep with angels, dear sister” 12.8.19 Memorial of a Loved One Sponsor - Chantelle Anne Cooke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 12/15/2019 11:41:00 AM
She is more alive on her side than she would be here. I feel sure that she would not want you to mourn her and be sad. The connection you had with her will never be broken. This is such a lovely tribute to her Luloo. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 12/14/2019 10:19:00 AM
So beautiful a poem, and your sister reminds me of a close friend I lost. Quite the Piet, you are! Panagiota
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Date: 12/14/2019 2:07:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Laura
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Date: 12/9/2019 10:47:00 AM
I can't believe no comments yet on this one. I see you continue to be inspired by the tragedy of your sisters death. It's a beautiful if not mournful write, but there is light and hope you find in dealing with this loss. Very touching Laura!
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Date: 12/11/2019 1:15:00 PM
thank you sweet friend, I don't mind not getting comments as long as I touch 1 person out there. Thank you x:-)-luloo
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