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If Only I Could

heal every eclipsed heart, seed periwinkle dreams with prose, perhaps, moon too will sing lavender stars.

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Paige Hind

Date: 9/9/2023 3:29:00 PM

Beautiful. I think you have heart. Just beautiful!

Valsa George

Date: 8/28/2023 9:27:00 PM

So succinct and so beautiful ! I can gauge the depth of your magnanimity. Your prayer and wish to heal every eclipsed heart is saintly. Your wish to see them filled with the seeds of 'periwinkle deams' is even more endearing. Amazing depth in your economy of words, dear Empress !

Ink Empress
Date: 8/31/2023 1:56:00 PM

Thank you, your comments are as always so soul warming. Grateful for your support

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/28/2023 7:33:00 AM

This eclipses my fondest expectations for four lines of serendipity. ~ Lunar Launch

Ink Empress
Date: 8/31/2023 1:55:00 PM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment truly

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/27/2023 4:51:00 PM

Very wistful and tender, also love 'periwinkle dreams' and 'lavender stars' - poetry can heal so much~

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 9:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment . I appreciate your visit

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 11:53:00 AM

Ahh!! Moon sings lavender stars. I like the descriptiveness of this one. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 9:10:00 PM

Thank you Sara, so grateful

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/27/2023 10:13:00 AM

Well composed. Blessings always.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2023 7:41:00 AM

So pretty! May God bless you so!

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/27/2023 6:59:00 AM

Your profound and poignant words have crafted a captivating short poem, evoking a yearning for a simpler existence, where the power to heal others lies within our grasp. Your innate talent for painting vivid scenes with such brevity is truly remarkable.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 11:45:00 PM

Your feedback truly is amazing. Thank you for understanding and for being so very supportive. Appreciate it all

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/27/2023 6:58:00 AM

Oh Empress, the beauty of thy words shines through in your sweet sentiments! A lovely poem indeed!!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Tom Woody

Date: 8/27/2023 6:09:00 AM

Until a recent comment I didn't realize you were in the field of working with trauma victims. Counselor? Psychologist? Social worker? Your desire to want to help the less fortunate is awesome inky. Gosh, I'd love to see just one photo and learn what life is like in Maldives

Tom Woody
Date: 8/27/2023 10:17:00 AM

Yes, Maria told me she's seen you. I'm jealous

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 10:15:00 AM

Hahha of maldives? Maria has seen :D

Tom Woody
Date: 8/27/2023 9:30:00 AM

Wow. Thx for gracing us with a brief bio. I feel humbled. Now, about that photo...

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 6:27:00 AM

Kingy, I am an IO psychologist, i did my bachelors of psychology in Australia, and masters degree from the UK, and i did my pre degree in malaysia, and now living here in maldives, i find soup very safe, no maldivians , i dnt have to hide, i am still anonymous on insta abt my location. I am a mermaid, and i love the sea, i am not a patriot but i love the nature here. Thank u so much for always being supportive

Silent One

Date: 8/27/2023 3:50:00 AM

If only life was so simple and we could heal people so easily... You wrote a deep short poem here..

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 7:50:00 AM

Awwn thank you… was for a contest ;D im so blessed to read your thoughts always

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/27/2023 1:49:00 AM

I am loving the hopeful and wishful imagery here, as your heart wants to paint every other eclipsed heart with magic and mystique.. How beautiful is that! You have the talent to carve such an eloquent scene with so few words.. This has made me go wow!! "If only I could heal every eclipsed heart, seed periwinkle dreams" Love that! "Perhaps, moon too will sing lavender stars" Definitely the moon will, and along with her, I will sing too~ Singing and swirling along with your ethereal poetic prose!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/27/2023 6:32:00 AM

You are such a cute angelic star

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/27/2023 1:37:00 AM

Love lavender stars... sings and brings me joy, joy, joy... love it. God bless you with much love, Gina