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If Only I Could

If only I could have the power, I would make many changes. Tears that come down like rain, would all disappear. People would feel love, no more hurt and pain. If only I could, changes would come about myself. Self would tell others, a great big no. Only smiles and laughter, everything else would go. If only I could have the power, to buy this in a store. I would buy a case for myself, then a case or two maybe more. I would give out, with a great big shout. For now I will dream, until I have the power.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/28/2023 10:33:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome piece, Paula:-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2023 11:37:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Thanks for calling this awesome and for a placement. That puts a smile on my heart. I enjoyed writing it for your contest. Thanks for having it. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day......................

Valsa George

Date: 4/28/2023 10:02:00 AM

If someone had invested you with power I am sure you would have made some positive changes. I love your attitude and simplicity ! Congratulations Paula on the honorable mention you have secured

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2023 10:20:00 AM

Thank You for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Yes, if I had the power I would use it for many positive changes. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great/blessed day......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/29/2023 1:16:00 PM

Paula, You are such a joyfyul soul Pangie XO

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2023 10:50:00 AM

Thank You for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my write. Have a great/blessed day......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2023 12:27:00 PM

Great job with this theme. I hope to write on that theme as well.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2023 1:06:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my write. Good luck with your write. Have a great/blessed day......................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/29/2023 10:49:00 AM

A delightful "if only" poem Paula. So much hope, and such wonderful things to hope for. Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2023 1:05:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "If only I could" write. Hope is always needed. Have a great/blessed day......................

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/29/2023 9:33:00 AM

Faith within our hearts is what performs miracles, dearest Paula, therefore one day you will have the power to do all these beautiful things. Be blessed!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thank You for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this one. Have a great/blessed day......................