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If I Die In My Sleep

If I die in my sleep, hope I'm doing things I like Like not throwing up or falling off my trike Probably didn't tell you Now who's kidding who So back to my bull cocky, or else take a hike

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Judith S

Date: 1/14/2018 9:40:00 AM

Hopefully ... if we are to go in our sleep .. we are sleeping :) Riding a trike is not recommended when sleeping.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 1:20:00 PM

LOL Haven't really thought of that!!! Love, Jack xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/14/2018 8:34:00 AM

I do suppose I'd weep//if you died in your sleep//be more dramatic//if you died in the attic//doing wild things with Little Bo Peep! LIVE ON JACKSON OF THE SILVER MANE!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 4:53:00 PM

Okay go to the head of the class... your lims are outshining mine!!! That's going to have to stop!!! LOL Just kidding.. great fun writes my friend!!!!!!!!!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 8:45:00 AM

I often dream about that... wowsers, what a performance!!!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/14/2018 7:54:00 AM

Love this ink! I nearly died doing something I love (biking) not knowing what hit me, it would have been a pleasant way to go (for me, not for observers or kin of course) ...may I be as lucky in the end.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/14/2018 8:57:00 AM

Lots! Amen to that <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 8:04:00 AM

WOW!!! Any broken bones??? Thankfully you survived... phew! Love ya dear Mo... Jackson! xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2018 6:56:00 AM

I can relate Jack i was so worried about my recent surgery and not waking up but then again I'd never have known any difference - would much rather go peacefully than suffer. I was meant to go to a funeral on Friday of a friend who died in his armchair - was such a shock, unfortunately I wasn't well enough to go but am very much on the mend as from yesterday. Take care my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 7:04:00 AM

Sorry to make light of this when you are going through such difficult time!!! All my best for a speedy recovery, my good sweet friend... love, bro!!! xxx

Silent One

Date: 1/14/2018 6:35:00 AM

This is a sad one JAck, but I suppose dying in ones sleep is pain free... Ive had a couple of friends who died in their sleep...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/14/2018 6:43:00 AM

If I had my choice, I wouldn't die... ever!!!