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If I Could Write

If I could write just one more time fill a page with different rhymes make discoveries with pen and mind of what I'd say if given the time If I could write just one more time using words that best describe reaching inside the inner mind finding feeling just like mine If I could write just one more time My love would be my greatest crime To steal your heart or defend your honor My hidden love I'd wish you to discover If I could write just one more time I write of heaven that's yours and mine And I'd make heaven a wonderful place My two favorite things your love and Gods grace

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Eileen Clark

Date: 9/25/2023 10:01:00 AM

Hi love your poem, you truly are a poet and an artist painting a beautiful picture for the readers, best regards.

Karen Jones

Date: 9/21/2023 8:43:00 PM

I love the unique voice your poetry has.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/5/2023 2:14:00 PM

A beautiful poem my good friend. A pleasure to have found and read this gem. A fav... God bless..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2023 3:07:00 PM

If only I could write again.I enjoyed reading your poem.

The Situation
Date: 8/2/2023 3:24:00 PM

There you are. I was wondering if I was going to get you. I see you've been gone for a while. So have I, burned out but I'm back. I remember a baby. I wonder how old now? Anyway I got you and that's all I wanted. Are you on facebook?

Valsa George

Date: 7/11/2023 11:25:00 PM

This is so beautiful ! The two things you crave most are her love and God's grace. May you get greater chances to write and sing of love. Thanks S for your kind visit to my page.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/21/2022 10:06:00 AM

This flows well, i feel its spirit; a good Expressive deep enough piece.'

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/24/2022 9:04:00 PM

Enjoyed. love phyl

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2021 4:35:00 PM

I like this because it is hopeful, and light.

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/17/2019 5:29:00 PM

Writing can create a better world! Let the poetry enter your soul and you become a better person! Nice verse hear and the ending is sweet! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2017 12:44:00 AM

What a gem this is! I liked it very much.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/8/2015 10:12:00 AM

A right enough write alright, enjoyed the thoughts/wishes expressed here..'

John Fleming

Date: 11/5/2015 7:08:00 AM

A very moving tribute, Situation. Warm feelings! Best regards! :) john

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/11/2015 6:34:00 PM

Dear Situation, What beautiful write on the subjects of love and faith, sincere and honest love the devotional content of this wonderful heart felt work, glad I stopped by and read this tonight, and by the way my favorite holiday is Christmas and than Halloween, lol, cheri D.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/11/2015 3:15:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this Sunday afternoon. Light & Love

Diane Christian

Date: 9/9/2015 2:31:00 AM

lovely poem

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2015 7:54:00 PM

You know why you're awesome, because you come from heart and soul. That's all it takes. Situation, it was nice seeing you at the soup today. I know my poems all crazy...but, it means a lot to me, having you stop by. Hugs. . Linda

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/8/2015 5:42:00 PM

This is the first time I read your work. I must say. I found it very enjoyable. Great write. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2015 4:34:00 PM

Situation, your write is full of dripping love, I quite like and thanks for visiting my poem, choices ~~