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If I could write

If I could write just one more time fill a page with different rhymes make discoveries with pen and mind of what I'd say if given the time If I could write just one more time using words that best describe reaching inside the inner mind finding feeling just like mine If I could write just one more time My love would be my greatest crime To steal your heart or defend your honor My hidden love I'd wish you to discover If I could write just one more time I write of heaven that's yours and mine And I'd make heaven a wonderful place My two favorite things your love and Gods grace

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Date: 10/17/2019 5:29:00 PM
Writing can create a better world! Let the poetry enter your soul and you become a better person! Nice verse hear and the ending is sweet! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/18/2017 12:44:00 AM
What a gem this is! I liked it very much.
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Date: 11/8/2015 10:12:00 AM
A right enough write alright, enjoyed the thoughts/wishes expressed here..'
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:08:00 AM
A very moving tribute, Situation. Warm feelings! Best regards! :) john
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Date: 10/11/2015 6:34:00 PM
Dear Situation, What beautiful write on the subjects of love and faith, sincere and honest love the devotional content of this wonderful heart felt work, glad I stopped by and read this tonight, and by the way my favorite holiday is Christmas and than Halloween, lol, cheri D.
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Date: 10/11/2015 3:15:00 PM
So nice to read your verse this Sunday afternoon. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:31:00 AM
lovely poem
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Date: 9/8/2015 7:54:00 PM
You know why you're awesome, because you come from heart and soul. That's all it takes. Situation, it was nice seeing you at the soup today. I know my poems all crazy...but, it means a lot to me, having you stop by. Hugs. . Linda
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Date: 9/8/2015 5:42:00 PM
This is the first time I read your work. I must say. I found it very enjoyable. Great write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:34:00 PM
Situation, your write is full of dripping love, I quite like and thanks for visiting my poem, choices ~~
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